Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "in my life" and improve grammar by saying "memorize my subjects well" instead of "so good." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I consider memorizing one of my strengths because it has helped me excel in school. For example, I can remember my subjects well, which allows me to achieve good grades.

提案: Your answer is somewhat disorganized and incomplete. Try to avoid filler words like "umm" and complete your sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide a clear conclusion.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I forgot my mother's birthday two years ago, which made her very upset. Since then, I have been more careful to remember special dates.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "puts out more priority fears." Try to be more precise and use linking words to organize your ideas. Also, avoid filler words and use correct verb forms.

例: I don't need to remember many things daily because I follow a routine that prioritizes important tasks. However, for special events or meetings, I set reminders to make sure I don't forget them.

提案: Your answer has grammar errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, try to link your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

例: I usually take notes on my phone since I always carry it with me. By checking these notes regularly, I can remember important things and avoid forgetting them, which has helped me a lot.

× I could memorize my subjects so good and get a good number as well.

✓ I could memorize my subjects so well and get good grades as well.

The word 'good' is an adjective and should be replaced with the adverb 'well' to modify the verb 'memorize'. Also, 'number' is incorrect in this context; 'grades' is the appropriate plural noun for academic scores.

× I forgot my mother's birthday one time, I think it was two years ago, and she was very mad and upset about it and I.

✓ I forgot my mother's birthday one time, I think it was two years ago, and she was very mad and upset about it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and I' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'and I' corrects the sentence structure and maintains past tense consistency.

× I need to set reminder to don't forget it.

✓ I need to set a reminder so I don't forget it.

The phrase 'set reminder to don't forget it' is incorrect. 'Set a reminder' requires the article 'a', and 'so I don't forget it' is the correct way to express purpose. Using 'to don't' is grammatically incorrect.

× Most of the time I taking notes in my phone notes because I always carry my phone with me and with a simple check I can remember those things and don't forget it.

✓ Most of the time I take notes in my phone because I always carry it with me, and with a simple check, I can remember those things and not forget them.

The phrase 'I taking notes' is incorrect; it should be 'I take notes' to match present tense. Also, 'phone notes' is redundant; 'phone' suffices. 'Don't forget it' should be 'not forget them' to agree with plural 'things'.

× It's helped me very much be because before that I almost forget it, forgotten about everything.

✓ It has helped me very much because before that I almost forgot it and had forgotten about everything.

The phrase 'be because' is incorrect and should be 'because'. 'Almost forget it' should be in past tense 'almost forgot it' to maintain tense consistency. 'Forgotten' is a past participle and needs an auxiliary verb; 'had forgotten' is correct here.