Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'I'm usually pay' nên là 'I usually pay', 'would forgot' nên là 'forget'. Bạn cũng nên tránh dùng từ 'comfortable' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I usually pay close attention when learning new information. However, sometimes I forget details if I am distracted or thinking about many things at once.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm always remember' nên là 'I always remember', và câu 'all the day I have an exams' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because important memories usually have a strong impact on me. For example, I always remember my parents' birthdays and the days I have exams, which helps me stay calm.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự liên kết và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'review against my last lesson' không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to do my housework and homework. Also, I review my previous lessons to practice and learn new things.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, ví dụ 'Addition remember the date and the best memories is a good' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone. Also, I try to remember important dates and special memories because they help me recall information better.

× The main reason is I'm usually pay close attention when I learn new information and knowledge.

✓ The main reason is I usually pay close attention when I learn new information and knowledge.

The verb 'pay' should be in the base form after 'usually' to correctly express habitual action in the present tense. 'I'm usually pay' is incorrect because 'am' is not used with another verb in base form here.

× However, sometimes I would forgot details if I'm thinking about many things at once or feeling distracted and comfortable.

✓ However, sometimes I would forget details if I'm thinking about many things at once or feeling distracted and uncomfortable.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'would' the base form 'forget' should be used. Also, 'comfortable' is incorrect in this context; 'uncomfortable' fits better to express distraction.

× No, I have never forgotten anything important because significant memories usually have a strong impact on me.

✓ No, I have never forgotten anything important because significant memories usually have a strong impact on me.

This sentence is correct in present perfect tense and present simple tense; no correction needed.

× For example, I'm always remember important days like my mom birthday, my dad's birthday all the day I have an exams.

✓ For example, I always remember important days like my mom's birthday, my dad's birthday, and all the days I have exams.

'I'm always remember' is incorrect; 'I always remember' is correct for habitual actions. Also, possessive form 'mom's birthday' is needed. 'All the day I have an exams' should be plural 'all the days I have exams'.

× It's helped me stay cool.

✓ It helps me stay cool.

'It's helped' is past tense, but the context suggests a general truth, so present tense 'It helps' is better. Also, 'stay cool' is correct.

× About my daily life. I need to remember to do my housework, my homework and review against my last lesson, to practice and learn new things about life.

✓ Regarding my daily life, I need to remember to do my housework, my homework, review my last lesson, practice, and learn new things about life.

'About my daily life.' is a sentence fragment; it should be connected properly. 'Review against my last lesson' is incorrect; 'review my last lesson' is correct. The list should be parallel and properly punctuated.

× For me, I usually remember significant things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone.

✓ For me, I usually remember significant things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Addition remember the date and the best memories is a good.

✓ Additionally, remembering the date and the best memories is good.

'Addition remember' is incorrect; 'Additionally, remembering' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.