Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较自然，但可以更简洁并避免重复。建议直接回答问题后，用一两个具体例子支持，避免冗长。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget small tasks like pouring a glass of water, so I usually write reminders to help me.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, I have. For example, when I was in high school, my teacher asked me to go to her office, but after returning from the toilet, I forgot. Fortunately, my deskmate reminded me.

提案: 回答内容具体，但可以用连接词连接句子，使表达更流畅，同时避免使用“etc.”，尽量列举具体例子。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember new vocabulary for my studies. Also, I have to do tasks given by my parents, such as hanging out clothes to dry and changing the turtle's water.

提案: 回答简洁且有效，但可以用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: I usually write important things down on paper or in my phone's memo. Then, I place the paper somewhere visible or set a reminder on my phone to help me remember.

× No, I have a bad memory, so I tend to forget something very quickly.

✓ No, I have a bad memory, so I tend to forget things very quickly.

The word 'something' is singular, but the context implies forgetting multiple items or things in general. Using the plural 'things' is more appropriate here to express the general tendency to forget various items.

× Yes, I remember in the high school my teacher asked me to go to her office but when I came back from the toilet I forgot about it.

✓ Yes, I remember in high school my teacher asked me to go to her office but when I came back from the toilet I forgot about it.

The phrase 'in the high school' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the' before 'high school'. Generally, when referring to school as a general institution, no article is needed. This is an article error but also relates to singular/plural usage in context.

× Yes, I remember in the high school my teacher asked me to go to her office but when I came back from the toilet I forgot about it.

✓ Yes, I remember in high school my teacher asked me to go to her office but when I came back from the toilet I forgot about it.

The preposition 'in the high school' is not appropriate here; the correct phrase is 'in high school' without 'the'. This is a common preposition and article usage error.

× In terms of study, I need to memorize some new words every day.

✓ In terms of studying, I need to memorize some new words every day.

The phrase 'in terms of study' is less natural than 'in terms of studying' because 'studying' is the gerund form acting as a noun here, which fits better after 'in terms of'.

× In terms of life, I need to remember some tasks assigned to me by my parents, for example, to hand out the clothes to dry or change the water for the turtle, etc.

✓ In terms of life, I need to remember some tasks assigned to me by my parents, for example, to hang out the clothes to dry or change the water for the turtle, etc.

The phrase 'hand out the clothes to dry' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'hang out' when referring to putting clothes outside to dry. This is a preposition and verb usage error.