Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“memorial”应为“memorizer”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子直接表达观点，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget tasks even when I try hard to remember them.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，如“forgot”应为“forget”，句子不连贯。建议用更准确的句子表达自己忘记的事情类型，并避免口语填充词。

例: No, I usually remember important events well, but I sometimes forget small or subtle things.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，缺少连贯性。建议先列出需要记住的物品，然后用连词连接，表达更完整的意思。

例: When I go out, I always check if I have my keys, phone, and extra battery in case my phone runs out of power.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，句子没有结束。建议完整表达记忆方法，并使用连贯的句子结构。

例: I write notes on the door listing important things like keys, phone, and change to remind myself before leaving.

× Actually I'm not a good memorial because I always forgot to do something and even though I remember so hard, I still can't figure what I forgot.

✓ Actually I'm not good at memorising because I always forget to do things and even though I try hard to remember, I still can't figure out what I forgot.

memorial用错了，应该用memorising表示记忆能力；forgot应为forget，时态应与现在时匹配；do something应改为do things，复数形式更合适；remember so hard表达不自然，改为try hard to remember更准确；figure后面缺少介词out。

× Actually I'm not a good memorial because I always forgot to do something and even though I remember so hard, I still can't figure what I forgot.

✓ Actually I'm not good at memorising because I always forget to do things and even though I try hard to remember, I still can't figure out what I forgot.

forgot是过去式，但句子表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时forget。

× Uh, Nope. I really forgot things that, umm, subtle.

✓ Uh, nope. I really forget things that are, umm, subtle.

forgot是过去式，但这里表达的是一般情况，应使用一般现在时forget；subtle前缺少系动词are。

× But the big events can hardly be forgotten by me.

✓ But big events can hardly be forgotten by me.

the big events中的定冠词the不必要，泛指大事件时不加冠词更自然。

× Because, you know, it's also difficult to forgot what has what kind of things.

✓ Because, you know, it's also difficult to forget what kind of things there are.

forgot应为不定式forget；句子结构混乱，调整为what kind of things there are更通顺。

× When I want to go out, I always have to check with my keys and phones and my.

✓ When I want to go out, I always have to check my keys, phone, and myself.

check后不需要介词with；phones应为phone，单数更合适；my后缺少名词，推测为myself。

× Except battery in case of my phone worn out.

✓ Except the battery in case my phone runs out of power.

句子缺主语和谓语；in case后不加of；worn out用错，应为runs out of power表示没电。

× I take a note on the door.

✓ I take a note and put it on the door.

take a note后应加动作说明；on the door位置正确，但句子不完整。

× On that list I put some important things such as keys, phones and changes in it because in.

✓ On that list, I put some important things such as keys, phone, and change because of that.

phones应为phone，changes应为change；句子末尾不完整，补充because of that使句意完整。