Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够流畅且有语法错误，句子结构不完整，缺少连贯性。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复和停顿。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because as a medical student, I have to remember a lot of information and knowledge.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，缺少具体细节和连贯的句子结构。建议练习用完整句子表达经历，并提供具体例子。

例: Sometimes I forget important things when I am very busy or stressed, especially before exams when I have to remember a lot of information.

提案: 回答较为简单，表达有些重复。建议使用更丰富的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember medical knowledge and professional terms. Also, I always have to keep track of important times, such as exam schedules.

提案: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多，句子不完整。建议练习使用正确的句型和连接词，表达方法更清晰。

例: I usually write important things down and set reminders for myself so that I don't forget them.

× Yes, I always good at memorizing things because I am a student of medicals I have a lot of knowledge and information to remember and.

✓ Yes, I am always good at memorizing things because I am a medical student and have a lot of knowledge and information to remember.

这里'medicals'是复数形式，但应使用单数形式'medical student'表示医学专业的学生。'medicals'不是正确的名词形式，应改为'medical student'。

× Yes, I always good at memorizing things because I am a student of medicals I have a lot of knowledge and information to remember and.

✓ Yes, I am always good at memorizing things because I am a medical student and have a lot of knowledge and information to remember.

原句缺少动词，'I always good'应为'I am always good'，且两个句子之间缺少连接词，需用'and'连接。

× Sometimes I forget something important when I have heavy. A strange and before I have an exam a lot of knowledge I need to.

✓ Sometimes I forget something important when I am stressed. Before an exam, I have a lot of knowledge I need to remember.

原句结构混乱，'I have heavy. A strange'不通顺，应改为'I am stressed'表示压力大。句子断裂，需重新组织表达。

× Sometimes I forget something important when I have heavy. A strange and before I have an exam a lot of knowledge I need to.

✓ Sometimes I forget something important when I am stressed. Before an exam, I have a lot of knowledge I need to remember.

'before I have an exam'中应使用介词'before an exam'，而不是'before I have an exam'，使表达更自然。

× I need to remember the knowledge and the words, you know, some professional words in medical.

✓ I need to remember knowledge and some professional medical terms.

'words in medical'表达不准确，应改为'medical terms'，且'knowledge'不可数，不用加冠词'the'。

× I need to remember the knowledge and the words, you know, some professional words in medical.

✓ I need to remember knowledge and some professional medical terms.

'in medical'用法错误，应改为'medical terms'，表示医学术语。

× I always write down them and always notice it to me so that I. I couldn't forget them and remember it always.

✓ I always write them down and always remind myself so that I don't forget them and can always remember them.

'write down them'应为'write them down'，'notice it to me'表达错误，应为'remind myself'。代词使用不当，需调整。

× I always write down them and always notice it to me so that I. I couldn't forget them and remember it always.

✓ I always write them down and always remind myself so that I don't forget them and can always remember them.

'couldn't'时态不合适，应使用一般现在时'don't'，保持时态一致。