Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“memory things”应为“memorizing things”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并避免冗余，例如直接说明自己记忆力不强，并介绍具体方法。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget details. Therefore, I usually write notes on paper and set reminders on my phone to help me remember important information.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“assistant”用词不当，应为“upset”，且句子不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明忘记的事情及其后果。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, which caused problems. For instance, last month I forgot my best friend's birthday, which made her very upset. Since then, I have developed the habit of setting reminders to avoid this.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但句子结构稍显简单，且时态不一致。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: To be honest, I need to remember many things in daily life, such as exam deadlines and my best friend's birthday. Since I'm not good at memorizing, I usually write these down on paper to keep track.

提案: 回答较为完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。建议丰富词汇，提升表达自然度。

例: I usually write important things down on paper, but sometimes I get busy and forget to check them. Therefore, I have started setting reminders on my phone, which I find very effective for remembering everything.

× No, I'm not good at memory things because I always forget some details.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I always forget some details.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorizing things'表示记忆的动作。memory是名词，不能直接修饰things。

× So I usually write the things down on the paper and set reminders to help me to remember.

✓ So I usually write things down on paper and set reminders to help me remember.

'the things'和'the paper'中的定冠词'the'不合适，应该去掉。'help me to remember'中to可以省略，简洁自然。

× And this.

该句不完整，缺少谓语，建议删除或补充完整句子。

× Yes, I've forgotten some important things before, which can be quite serious.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten some important things before, which was quite serious.

前文使用现在完成时，后半句描述过去的严重后果，时态应一致，改为过去时。

× For example, last month I forgot my best friend's birthday which made her very sad and assistant.

✓ For example, last month I forgot my best friend's birthday which made her very sad and upset.

'assistant'用错，正确表达应为'upset'表示难过。

× I have had a good habit to set reminder.

✓ I have developed a good habit of setting reminders.

'have had a good habit to set reminder'结构不正确，习惯后应接介词'of'和动名词形式，且'reminder'应为复数。

× To be honest, I have to remind a lot of things, such as the final exam deadline and my best friend's birthday.

✓ To be honest, I have to remember a lot of things, such as the final exam deadline and my best friend's birthday.

'remind'是使别人记得，句中应使用'remember'表示自己记得。

× I'm not good at memorizing those things, so I had to write them down on the paper.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing those things, so I have to write them down on paper.

时态应与前句保持一致，使用一般现在时'have to'，且'the paper'中定冠词不需要。

× I always write them down on the paper, but sometimes I am very busy and ignore them.

✓ I always write them down on paper, but sometimes I am very busy and ignore them.

'the paper'中定冠词不需要，去掉更自然。

× So I have started to set all reminders on my phone.

✓ So I have started setting all reminders on my phone.

'start'后接动名词更自然，'started setting'比'started to set'更常用。