Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있으며, 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않고 상대방에게 질문을 되묻는 부분은 피해야 합니다. 또한, 문장이 중복되고 불필요한 부분이 있어 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I'm not very good at memorising because it makes me feel tired and stressed.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 구체적인 예시를 들어 내용을 풍부하게 하고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, before exams, I sometimes forget the material I studied, which makes me anxious.

提案: 답변이 불완전하고 문장이 매끄럽지 않습니다. 주제를 명확히 하고, 구체적인 내용을 덧붙여 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule because it changes every day, so I have to keep track of my tasks carefully.

提案: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 반복되는 표현과 불필요한 단어가 있습니다. 간결하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습과 더 구체적인 설명을 추가하는 것이 좋습니다.

例: I use a scheduling app on my phone to remember important tasks, which helps me stay organized and not forget anything.

× I think I'm not good at memorizing things because memorizing makes me feel really exhausted so.

✓ I think I'm not good at memorizing things because memorizing makes me feel really exhausted.

The sentence ends with 'so' which is a coordinating conjunction that requires a following clause. It is incorrect to end the sentence with 'so' alone. Removing 'so' corrects the sentence structure.

× You don't also enjoy memorizing?

✓ Don't you also enjoy memorizing?

The sentence is a question but the word order is incorrect. In English questions, the auxiliary verb comes before the subject. Changing 'You don't also enjoy' to 'Don't you also enjoy' corrects the question form.

× Many time I always forgot something important so I can remember a specific thing I forgot, but especially.

✓ Many times I always forgot something important so I can remember a specific thing I forgot, but especially.

The phrase 'Many time' is incorrect; the plural form 'Many times' should be used to indicate multiple occasions.

× Many time I always forgot something important so I can remember a specific thing I forgot, but especially.

✓ Many times I always forgot something important so I could remember a specific thing I forgot, but especially.

The modal verb 'can' should be in past form 'could' to match the past tense context of the sentence.

× For the exams I always forgot what I studied.

✓ For the exams, I always forgot what I studied.

A comma is needed after 'exams' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× I need to remember that, umm. Which schedule I have to be done by today since my schedule is different day by day?

✓ I need to remember which tasks I have to complete by today since my schedule is different day by day.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun and sentence structure. 'Which schedule I have to be done' is incorrect; it should be 'which tasks I have to complete'. Also, the sentence should not be a question but a statement.

× I need to remember that, umm. Which schedule I have to be done by today since my schedule is different day by day?

✓ I need to remember which tasks I have to complete today since my schedule changes day by day.

The preposition 'by' is unnecessary here; 'complete today' is more natural. Also, 'different day by day' is better expressed as 'changes day by day'.

× I remember important things by using a schedule app.

✓ I remember important things by using a scheduling app.

While 'schedule app' is understandable, 'scheduling app' is the more common and correct term for an app that helps organize schedules.

× Umm, I usually use a schedule app which I can install on my mobile phone and it helps me.

✓ I usually use a scheduling app that I can install on my mobile phone, and it helps me.

Replacing 'which' with 'that' is more appropriate in defining relative clauses. Also, 'schedule app' is better as 'scheduling app'.