Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，存在语法错误和用词不当（如'stealing memory'应为'steady memory'或'good memory'）。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用恰当词汇表达记忆能力的不同方面。

例: I think I have a good memory when I need to memorize something important, but I sometimes forget small things in daily life.

提案: 回答不够具体，表达不自然，'common sense'用法错误。建议直接回答问题，提供具体例子，并使用连贯的句子结构。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once missed the deadline to submit a task and take a test.

提案: 回答重复且句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达需要记住的内容，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks and research work because I have many responsibilities to manage.

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明记忆方法，并避免无关内容。

例: I usually write down important things and make a plan to remind myself of the dates and details.

× Honestly it's hard to see because if I need to recite something I think I have a stealing memory, but if I just need to remember something in daily time I think the ability is weak.

✓ Honestly it's hard to say because if I need to recite something I think I have a strong memory, but if I just need to remember something in daily life I think the ability is weak.

原句中'stealing memory'用词错误，应为'strong memory'表示记忆力强；'daily time'表达不准确，应改为'daily life'表示日常生活。

× Yes, it's common sense. In my daily time for example, I forgot the day to finish the task and conduct a test.

✓ Yes, it's common. For example, in my daily life, I forgot the day to finish the task and conduct a test.

'common sense'意思是常识，与句意不符，应改为'common'表示常有的事情；'daily time'应改为'daily life'；句中时态正确，无需改动。

× I need to remember some tasks and workloads in the daily time because in my daily time I need to do so many research and tasks, so it's vital to remember this plan.

✓ I need to remember some tasks and workloads in daily life because in my daily life I need to do so much research and many tasks, so it's vital to remember this plan.

'daily time'应改为'daily life'；'so many research'错误，research是不可数名词，应改为'so much research'；'tasks'复数正确，'workloads'复数正确。

× And follow some important things. I will write down it and make a plan to remind me the date and the details because I think it's a good hobby and for me.

✓ To remember some important things, I will write them down and make a plan to remind me of the date and the details because I think it's a good habit for me.

'write down it'错误，正确用法是'write them down'；'remind me the date'应为'remind me of the date'；'hobby'应为'habit'更符合语境；句子结构不完整，需调整。