Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，例如“for example, I can either”这句话不完整，影响了表达的自然性和有效性。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免语法错误，并且可以适当丰富细节，使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things, especially numbers and dates. For example, I can easily remember people's faces and their phone numbers, which helps me stay connected with friends and colleagues.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但可以通过使用连接词使句子更连贯，例如在“Especially when I attend an exam”前加上“Sometimes”或“Actually”。此外，可以增加具体细节来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. Actually, when I attend an exam, I often feel so nervous that I sometimes forget my ID card or other essential items, which can be quite stressful.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“remember turn off the light”应为“remember to turn off the light”。建议注意动词不定式的使用，同时可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I really need to remember some small but important things in my daily life. For example, I need to remember to turn off the lights before I go out, and I also have to take my keys with me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，“write down them”应为“write them down”。建议注意代词的位置和用法，同时可以增加连接词和具体细节，使回答更自然和丰富。

例: I usually keep important information on my phone or write them down in my notebook. This way, I can easily check them whenever I need to.

× I can remember people's face and their phone numbers easily.

✓ I can remember people's faces and their phone numbers easily.

这里face是可数名词，表示“脸”，因为指的是多个人的脸，应该用复数faces。

× I need to remember turn off the light before I go out and I also need to take the key.

✓ I need to remember to turn off the light before I go out and I also need to take the key.

动词remember后面接动词时，若表示记得去做某事，应该用不定式to do形式，这里缺少to。

× I usually keep the important things in my phone or write down them on my notebooks.

✓ I usually keep the important things in my phone or write them down in my notebooks.

write down是及物动词短语，宾语应紧跟其后，不能分开；另外，write down后面接宾语时，介词应为in而非on，且write down them应改为write them down。