Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
Actually it depends on my mood because when I when I feel great, I can easily memorize something, but when I feel upset, uh, I can't memorize something easily.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Of course, I have, uh, forgotten something important that when I was in university, I I had forgotten my assign assignment to send sent to my teacher.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
I need to remember taking, taking my medication and feed my and feeding my cat this kind of things because these are my responsibilities in my life.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Sometimes I sometimes I just use my smartphone to remember something that is important to me. Sometimes I can use a calendar or not, uh, this kind of applications, it's really helpful.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak tekrar eden kelimeler ve duraklamalar var. Daha akıcı ve etkili olmak için cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi bağlayabilirsiniz.
例: It depends on my mood; when I feel great, I can easily memorize things, but if I'm upset, it's much harder for me to remember.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 65.0提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha net ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, daha spesifik detaylar vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.
例: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important assignment to my teacher when I was at university, which caused me some trouble.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 60.0提案: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğru yapmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha mantıklı hale getirebilirsiniz.
例: I need to remember to take my medication and feed my cat because these are important responsibilities in my daily life.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 65.0提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve belirsizlikler var. Daha net ifadeler kullanmalı ve cümlenizi bağlaçlarla daha tutarlı hale getirmelisiniz.
例: I usually use my smartphone or calendar apps to help me remember important things, which I find very helpful.
文法
× I I had forgotten my assign assignment to send sent to my teacher.
✓ I had forgotten my assignment to send to my teacher.
The sentence contains redundant words and incorrect verb forms. 'assign' should be 'assignment' (noun), and 'send sent' is incorrect; only 'send' is needed after 'to'. The past perfect 'had forgotten' is correctly used to indicate an action completed before another past action.
× I need to remember taking, taking my medication and feed my and feeding my cat this kind of things because these are my responsibilities in my life.
✓ I need to remember to take my medication and feed my cat because these are my responsibilities in my life.
After 'need to remember', the infinitive form 'to take' is correct, not the gerund 'taking'. Also, 'feed my and feeding my cat' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'feed my cat'. 'This kind of things' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of things' or omitted for clarity.
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