Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết và sử dụng câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I play chess, I need to remember various tactics and openings, and I can recall around 2000 of them.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, one day I went outside but forgot my house key because I was very busy that day.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để liệt kê các hoạt động và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine, such as brushing my teeth, dressing properly, going to school, and going to the gym.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn về cách bạn ghi nhớ.

例: To remember important things, I always write notes. For example, when learning English vocabulary, I write words on sticky notes and paste them around my room so I can see and remember them easily.

× I would say I'm a very good person in memorizing.

✓ I would say I'm very good at memorizing.

The phrase 'good person in memorizing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'good at memorizing' because 'good at' is the proper collocation to express skill in an activity.

× Just for example, I in the in chess, I I need to remember the tactics or the opening and I would say I remember like 2000.

✓ For example, in chess, I need to remember the tactics or the openings, and I would say I remember about 2000.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('I in the in chess, I I') causing confusion. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and clarifies meaning with proper word order and article use.

× Yes, I have ever forgot something important.

✓ Yes, I have ever forgotten something important.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past form, but after 'have' (present perfect), the past participle 'forgotten' should be used. 'Ever' is unusual here but acceptable in some contexts.

× And that day I went outside and I forgot my key to open my door.

✓ And that day I went outside and I forgot my key to open the door.

The phrase 'my door' is less common; 'the door' is more natural when referring to one's own door in this context.

× I would say is the routine and for example I need to brush my teeth, dress well and go to school and go to gym.

✓ I would say it is the routine; for example, I need to brush my teeth, dress well, go to school, and go to the gym.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'it' after 'I would say' and lacks proper punctuation and articles. Adding 'it' and 'the' before 'gym' and commas improves clarity and correctness.

× To remember important things I always write on a note.

✓ To remember important things, I always write on a note.

A comma is needed after the introductory phrase for correct sentence structure.

× For example, in learning English I need to learn a lot of vocabularies, so sometimes I just write the vocabulary in the note and paste it on the word and sometimes I just looking at it and remember that.

✓ For example, in learning English, I need to learn a lot of vocabulary, so sometimes I just write the vocabulary on a note and paste it on the wall, and sometimes I just look at it and remember it.

'Vocabulary' is an uncountable noun, so 'vocabularies' is incorrect. 'Write the vocabulary on a note' is correct, not 'in the note'. 'Paste it on the word' is incorrect; it should be 'on the wall'. 'Just looking' should be 'just look' to match tense. 'Remember that' is better as 'remember it' for clarity.