Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm not excel at”应为“I am not good at”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并简洁明了地回答问题。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I usually rely on my phone or notes to help me remember important information.

提案: 回答中重复了“I have”，且表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达自己的记忆力差，并举具体例子。

例: Yes, I often forget important items like my ID card or student card because I have a poor memory, which can be quite frustrating.

提案: 回答较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时提供更具体的细节。

例: As a student, I need to remember various things daily, such as subject knowledge and English grammar, to enhance my skills and abilities.

提案: 回答中有重复“I I'd”，表达稍显啰嗦。建议简洁表达并使用连接词，使回答更自然流畅。

例: For important things, I usually use my smartphone to write notes because it's a very convenient method for me.

× I'm not excel at remembering something.

✓ I'm not good at remembering things.

这里动词'excel'用法错误，应该用形容词'good'来表达擅长某事，且'memorising'应使用复数形式'things'。建议用'good at + 动名词'结构表达擅长。

× I need to use some stuff for me to keep memorizing, such as my phones or some papers to write down to keep me remember something.

✓ I need to use some things to help me remember, such as my phone or some papers to write things down.

'stuff for me to keep memorizing'结构不正确，应该用'help me remember'。'phones'应为单数'phone'，'write down to keep me remember'语法混乱，改为'write things down'更自然。

× because I have I have extremely poor memory so I always forget something such as my ID card or my student card, so I really pity about it.

✓ because I have extremely poor memory, so I always forget things such as my ID card or my student card, so I really feel sorry about it.

重复'I have'错误，应去掉一个。'pity about it'用法错误，应该用'feel sorry about it'表达遗憾。'something'改为复数'things'更合适。

× Well there are a multitude of things I need to remember in my daily life because I am a student so I need to remember a lot of things such as some subjects knowledge and some English grammar to improve my skills and also improve my abilities.

✓ Well, there are a multitude of things I need to remember in my daily life because I am a student, so I need to remember a lot of things such as some subject knowledge and some English grammar to improve my skills and abilities.

'subjects knowledge'应为'subject knowledge'，因为'knowledge'是不可数名词，不用复数。'improve my skills and also improve my abilities'重复，简化为'improve my skills and abilities'更好。

× I really pity about it.

✓ I really feel sorry about it.

'pity'作为动词时不需要介词'about'，且表达遗憾应使用'feel sorry about'。

× I need to use some stuff for me to keep memorizing, such as my phones or some papers to write down to keep me remember something.

✓ I need to use some things to help me remember, such as my phone or some papers to write things down.

'for me to keep memorizing'结构不正确，应该用'help me remember'。'phones'应为单数'phone'，'write down to keep me remember'语法混乱，改为'write things down'更自然。

× I have I have extremely poor memory so I always forget something such as my ID card or my student card, so I really pity about it.

✓ I have extremely poor memory, so I always forget things such as my ID card or my student card, so I really feel sorry about it.

重复'I have'错误，应去掉一个。'pity about it'用法错误，应该用'feel sorry about it'表达遗憾。'something'改为复数'things'更合适。

× I need to use some stuff for me to keep memorizing, such as my phones or some papers to write down to keep me remember something.

✓ I need to use some things to help me remember, such as my phone or some papers to write things down.

'for me to keep memorizing'结构不正确，应该用'help me remember'。'phones'应为单数'phone'，'write down to keep me remember'语法混乱，改为'write things down'更自然。

× I have I have extremely poor memory so I always forget something such as my ID card or my student card, so I really pity about it.

✓ I have extremely poor memory, so I always forget things such as my ID card or my student card, so I really feel sorry about it.

重复'I have'错误，应去掉一个。'pity about it'用法错误，应该用'feel sorry about it'表达遗憾。'something'改为复数'things'更合适。