Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget easily.'

例: I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget easily. However, I try to improve by practising regularly.

提案: Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Provide a clear example with details. For instance, say 'Yes, I often forget important things. Last Sunday, I forgot my appointment password, which caused many problems.'

例: Yes, I often forget important things. Last Sunday, I forgot the password for my appointment, which caused many problems and delays.

提案: Answer clearly and use correct vocabulary. Explain what tasks you need to remember with examples. For example, 'I need to remember my daily tasks, such as reading assignments, because they are important for my studies.'

例: I need to remember my daily tasks, such as reading assignments and homework, because they are important for my studies and progress.

提案: Use proper sentence structure and vocabulary. Explain your method clearly with linking words. For example, 'First, I make a list of important things. Then, I set reminders on my phone to help me remember them easily.'

例: First, I make a list of important things I need to remember. Then, I set reminders on my phone, so I can easily recall them when needed.

× I am very forgotten person so I do not have any good memory, so I do not add a good memorable thing.

✓ I am a very forgetful person so I do not have a good memory, so I do not remember things well.

The adjective 'forgotten' is incorrectly used to describe a person; the correct adjective is 'forgetful'. Also, 'add a good memorable thing' is unclear and incorrect; it is better to say 'remember things well'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I am very forgetted person.

✓ Yes, I am a very forgetful person.

The word 'forgetted' is not a correct past tense or adjective form. The correct adjective is 'forgetful' to describe a person who often forgets things.

× Last last Sunday I forgotten my forgotten my password appointment so so this things create me many problems in my life.

✓ Last Sunday, I forgot my password appointment, so this caused many problems in my life.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb; here, simple past 'forgot' is correct. Repetition and incorrect plural 'this things' are corrected to 'this caused many problems' for grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I need to remember my daily life task because many tasks are imported in my life such as my eyelids reading.

✓ Yes, I need to remember my daily tasks because many tasks are important in my life, such as my eyelid reading.

The word 'imported' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'important'. Also, 'daily life task' should be plural 'daily tasks' for clarity. 'Eyelids reading' is unclear but kept as is assuming it is a specific task.

× Because I am a I am do not properly to my reading task so I remember reading task daily.

✓ Because I do not do my reading task properly, I remember the reading task daily.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect pronoun use ('I am a I am do not properly to'). It is corrected to a clear structure with proper subject and verb agreement.

× First of all I make a list to my rememberable things and I am not remember all things, so I set a schedule in my phone so I easily learned.

✓ First of all, I make a list of things to remember and I cannot remember everything, so I set a schedule on my phone so I can easily learn.

The preposition 'to' after 'make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'of'. Also, 'rememberable' is not standard; 'things to remember' is better. 'I am not remember' is incorrect; 'I cannot remember' is correct. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'So I easily learned' is changed to 'so I can easily learn' for tense consistency.