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会話

Part 1

試験官

Are you good at memorising things?

受験者

Yes, I'm pretty good at remembering things. I can easily recall numbers and dates, and I often remember people's names and faces. I also enjoy playing memory games, which helps me improve my memory.

試験官

Have you ever forgotten something important?

受験者

No, I don't usually forget important things. I write everything down in a planner, which helps me remember what I need to do.

試験官

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

受験者

I need to remember my homework task like deadlines and classes. I also have to check my emails to make sure I don't miss anything important.

試験官

How do you remember important things?

受験者

I like to write things down in a notebook or use my smartphone to remember important things. I also use Strictly notes and put them on my desk or fridge so I can see them easily.

評価

総合

総合: 7.0流暢さと一貫性: 7.0発音: 7.0文法: 7.0語彙: 7.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

スコア: 85.0

提案: 回答自然且内容丰富,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯,同时避免重复“remember”一词。

: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily recall numbers and dates, and I often remember people's names and faces. Moreover, I enjoy playing memory games, which helps me enhance this skill.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

スコア: 80.0

提案: 回答简洁明了,但可以增加细节和连接词,使答案更具体且连贯。

: No, I rarely forget important things because I always write everything down in a planner. This method helps me stay organised and ensures I remember all my tasks.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

スコア: 80.0

提案: 回答内容具体,但句子结构较简单,建议使用连接词丰富句子并避免语法错误。

: In my daily life, I need to remember homework tasks such as deadlines and classes. Besides that, I also check my emails regularly to avoid missing any important information.

How do you remember important things?

スコア: 75.0

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误('Strictly notes'应为'sticky notes'),且表达略显重复,建议纠正错误并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

: I usually write things down in a notebook or use my smartphone to keep track of important matters. Additionally, I use sticky notes and place them on my desk or fridge so I can easily see and remember them.

文法

Singular and plural issue

× I need to remember my homework task like deadlines and classes.

I need to remember my homework tasks like deadlines and classes.

这里的“task”应该用复数形式“tasks”,因为后面提到了多个截止日期和课程,表示多个任务。单复数不一致导致语法错误。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I also use Strictly notes and put them on my desk or fridge so I can see them easily.

I also use sticky notes and put them on my desk or fridge so I can see them easily.

原句中的“Strictly notes”是拼写错误,正确的词是“sticky notes”,表示便签纸。拼写错误属于形容词使用错误的一种。

重要語彙

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
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