Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法不够准确，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: No, I'm not good at memorising things because I have a poor memory. For example, in high school, my Chinese teacher often asked us to memorise poems, which I found very difficult.

提案: 回答较为完整，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节描述。

例: Yes, I have. Last summer holiday, I lost my bag while traveling. Fortunately, I found it at the lost and found, and I was very grateful to the person who returned it to me.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，‘case’一词使用不当，建议使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构需要调整以提高自然度。

例: There are many things I need to remember daily, but the most important is to bring my house key when I go out because I can't get into my home without it.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达略显重复，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意复数形式和介词的正确使用。

例: I usually record important dates, such as my friends' and family members' birthdays, in my phone's memo app so that I can check them regularly.

× No, I don't because I have poor memory and I remember when I was in high school and my Chinese teacher often asked us to remember Chinese poem, which was really painful.

✓ No, I am not because I have poor memory and I remember when I was in high school and my Chinese teacher often asked us to remember Chinese poems, which was really painful.

这里的“No, I don't”用法不正确，应该用“No, I am not”来回答“Are you good at memorising things?”这个问题，因为这里需要用系动词来表达状态。此外，'Chinese poem'应为复数形式'Chinese poems'，因为老师经常让他们记忆多首诗。

× No, I don't because I have poor memory and I remember when I was in high school and my Chinese teacher often asked us to remember Chinese poem, which was really painful.

✓ No, I don't because I have poor memory and I remember when I was in high school and my Chinese teacher often asked us to remember Chinese poems, which was really painful.

'Chinese poem'应为复数形式'Chinese poems'，因为老师经常让学生记忆多首诗。

× I think there are lots of things to remember, but the first thing comes to my mind is to bring the case when I go out 'cause I can't enter my home without it.

✓ I think there are lots of things to remember, but the first thing that comes to my mind is to bring the case when I go out 'cause I can't enter my home without it.

缺少关系代词'that'导致句子结构不完整，应加上'that'使句子更通顺。

× I was really grateful for the person who handed it in.

✓ I was really grateful to the person who handed it in.

表达感谢时，通常用'grateful to'而不是'grateful for'，所以应改为'I was really grateful to the person...'。