Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更准确，避免重复和语法错误。可以用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing short-term information. For instance, if you tell me your phone number now, I can remember it for a day or two. However, I find it difficult to remember things for a long time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用连贯的句子并适当使用连接词，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. When I was 18, my mother gave me my first credit card, which was very meaningful to me. However, I forgot the credit card number, which was quite embarrassing and inconvenient.

提案: 回答应避免重复和语法错误，句子应更简洁流畅。可以使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I need to remember my daily tasks. I have a habit of writing down what I need to do each day in a small notebook, and then I follow the plan.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，建议用更地道的英语表达习语和观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: There is a famous saying in Chinese that writing things down is better than just memorizing them. Therefore, I like to write important things in my diary because it is convenient and helps me remember better.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing short term things.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing short-term things.

“short term”作为复合形容词修饰名词时，应使用连字符连接，形成“short-term”。

× if you told tell me your numbers now, I can quickly remember it for a day or two days.

✓ if you tell me your numbers now, I can quickly remember them for a day or two.

“told tell”是重复错误，应使用“tell”；“numbers”是复数，代词应使用“them”而非“it”；“for a day or two days”中“two days”重复，改为“a day or two”。

× However, I have difficult to remember long term long term memories.

✓ However, I have difficulty remembering long-term memories.

“have difficult”应为“have difficulty”；“long term long term”重复，应为“long-term”；“remember”后接动名词形式“remembering”。

× Yes, I I've forgotten an important things

✓ Yes, I've forgotten an important thing.

“an”用于单数名词，“things”是复数，需改为单数“thing”。

× When I was 18 years old my mom gave me a credit card that was my first credit card in my life, so it's really meaningful one.

✓ When I was 18 years old, my mom gave me a credit card, which was the first credit card in my life, so it was really meaningful.

句子缺少逗号分隔时间状语；“that”改为“which”引导非限制性定语从句；“it's”应与过去时间一致改为“it was”；“meaningful one”改为“meaningful”。

× However, I forgot its credit card numbers

✓ However, I forgot the credit card numbers.

“its”指代不明确，信用卡号码应使用定冠词“the”。

× It was embarrassing and inconvenient so.

✓ So, it was embarrassing and inconvenient.

“so”应放句首引导结果，句子结构调整。

× I need to remember what I should do every day in my daily life.

✓ I need to remember what I should do every day in my life.

“daily life”重复，通常用“my life”即可。

× I have a habit that I will write down on the day what what things I need to do in a little book and follow the plan.

✓ I have a habit of writing down what I need to do each day in a little book and following the plan.

“have a habit that I will”结构不自然，改为“have a habit of doing”；“on the day what what things”重复且结构混乱，改为“what I need to do each day”；“follow the plan”改为动名词形式“following the plan”。

× That's my I need to remember.

✓ That's what I need to remember.

句子结构错误，缺少连接词，改为“That’s what I need to remember.”。

× In Chinese there are famous sentences that writing them important things is better than just memorizing them.

✓ In Chinese, there are famous sayings that writing important things down is better than just memorizing them.

“sentences”应为“sayings”更合适；“writing them important things”结构错误，改为“writing important things down”。

× So I would like to write down in my diary to remember important things.

✓ So I would like to write them down in my diary to remember important things.

“write down”后应有宾语，补充“them”指代重要事情。

× It's convenient.

✓ It's convenient.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。