Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คุณควรตอบคำถามอย่างตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'umm' และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและมีความสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things generally, but my friends say I can recall many details from past events. For instance, I can describe where we played, how we played, and the places we visited, which shows I have a decent memory.

提案: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสมหรือไม่ชัดเจน เช่น 'it's well lost' และควรอธิบายเหตุการณ์อย่างละเอียดและมีลำดับความคิดที่ดี

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once left my iPad at school because I was careless and didn't realize it until I got home, which caused me a lot of trouble.

提案: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงอธิบายเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับสิ่งที่ต้องจำในชีวิตประจำวันเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความชัดเจนและน่าสนใจมากขึ้น

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments to avoid forgetting them. For instance, I try to keep a schedule so I don't miss anything important.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'assault' และควรอธิบายวิธีการจำสิ่งสำคัญอย่างเป็นระบบและมีเหตุผล

例: I usually remember important things by associating them with strong emotions or making notes. If something is very important to me, I tend to remember it subconsciously, but I often forget less important details.

× I don't think I'm good at memorizing things but a lot of my friends say umm I can remember a lot of details from past.

✓ I don't think I'm good at memorizing things but a lot of my friends say umm I can remember a lot of details from the past.

The phrase 'from past' is missing the definite article 'the'. In English, when referring to a specific time period like 'past', the definite article 'the' is required to specify it as 'the past'.

× For example I can re describe a lot of details about where we played, how we played and which place we went.

✓ For example, I can describe a lot of details about where we played, how we played and which place we went.

The word 're describe' is incorrect; it should be 'describe'. The prefix 're' is unnecessary here and causes confusion. Also, a comma after 'For example' improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, it's myself.

✓ Yes, it is me.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. 'Myself' should be used when the subject and object are the same person and for emphasis. In this case, the correct pronoun is 'me' as the object of the verb 'is'.

× Funny, but I used to forget my iPads when I'm finish my schools because I just drop it and walk back home without realizing it's well lost so I have to fight.

✓ Funny, but I used to forget my iPad when I finished school because I just dropped it and walked back home without realizing it was lost, so I had to fight.

Multiple tense errors: 'I'm finish' should be past tense 'I finished'; 'schools' should be singular 'school' as it refers to the general concept; 'drop' and 'walk' should be past tense 'dropped' and 'walked'; 'it's well lost' is incorrect, should be 'it was lost'; 'have to fight' should be past tense 'had to fight' to maintain past narrative consistency.

× I need to remember not to forget things because I forgot a lot of things in the past and I try not to be.

✓ I need to remember not to forget things because I forgot many things in the past and I try not to.

The phrase 'a lot of things' is acceptable but 'many things' is more appropriate in formal contexts. Also, 'try not to be' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'try not to forget'. The correction simplifies to 'try not to' implying 'forget' from context.

× I can't remember important things but I recall those memories.

✓ I can't remember important things but I recall those memories.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I am. I might be weird but if the things is important to me to the extent levels I will subconsciously remember it but if it's not I completely forget it's and most my friend assault me for it.

✓ I am. I might be weird but if the things are important to me to that extent, I will subconsciously remember them, but if they're not, I completely forget them and most of my friends assault me for it.

Several errors: 'the things is' should be 'the things are' for subject-verb agreement; 'to the extent levels' is awkward, better as 'to that extent'; 'forget it's' should be 'forget them' to refer to plural 'things'; 'most my friend' should be 'most of my friends' for correct quantifier and plural noun.