Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“although I'm a young people”应为“although I'm young”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I don't think I'm good at memorising things because I often forget assignments at school.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，如“always forgotten”应为“always forget”。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often forget important things like meeting deadlines or assignments, and sometimes I even miss the meetings.

提案: 回答中有许多语气词和重复，影响表达的清晰度。建议减少无意义的词汇，结构更紧凑，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

例: I need to remember my class timetable, my friends' birthdays, my boyfriend's birthday, and our anniversary.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“about about”和“put in my put on my phone”。建议简化表达，使用连贯的句子，并说明具体方法。

例: Since I know I'm not good at remembering, I write important tasks and meetings in a list on my phone to remind myself.

× although I'm a young people but I always miss something.

✓ although I'm a young person but I always miss something.

people 是复数形式，表示“人们”，而这里需要单数形式 person 来指代“一个年轻人”。

× if there were a assignment I sometimes will forget it.

✓ if there was an assignment I sometimes will forget it.

assignment 是以元音音素开头的单数名词，前面应使用不定冠词 an 而不是 a。

× I always forgotten the deadline and even I didn't go to attend the meeting.

✓ I always forget the deadline and even I didn't go to attend the meeting.

always 表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 forget，而不是过去分词 forgotten。

× even I didn't go to attend the meeting.

✓ even I didn't attend the meeting.

go to attend 是冗余表达，动词 attend 直接使用即可，不需要 go to。

× if there are some important things like meetings or assignment,

✓ if there are some important things like meetings or assignments,

assignment 是可数名词，复数形式应为 assignments，与 meetings 一致。

× I always forgotten the deadline

✓ I always forget the deadline

这里表达习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 forget，而不是过去分词 forgotten。

× One more one.

✓ One by one.

表达“一个接一个”应使用固定短语 one by one，而不是 one more one。

× The most important is the because I'm a student, yes.

✓ The most important is because I'm a student, yes.

the 后面不应直接跟 because，去掉多余的定冠词。

× I will write them on.

✓ I will write them down.

write down 是固定短语，表示“写下”，而 write on 意义不符。

× I will list them and put in my put on my phone.

✓ I will list them and put them on my phone.

put on my phone 需要有宾语 them，且 put in my 是错误搭配，应改为 put them on my phone。