Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且句子不完整，导致表达不清晰。建议使用简单且正确的句子结构，直接回答问题并给出具体例子。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget to bring my children's school supplies when we go out.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，且内容不具体。建议先明确回答问题，然后用一两句具体描述忘记的重要事情及感受，使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have forgotten my best friend's birthday once. I felt really sorry because I was very busy and lost track of the date.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接说明日常需要记住的具体事项，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks in the morning and afternoon, as well as to prepare things before going to bed at night.

提案: 回答较为完整，但开头的疑问句不太合适，且部分表达不够地道。建议直接回答问题，使用更自然的表达，并适当使用连接词。

例: I usually remember important things by setting reminders and alarms on my phone. I also use the calendar app to keep track of important events.

× No, I'm not good at memory things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。'memory'是名词，不能直接修饰'things'。

× I usually forget to take my kids and fold.

✓ I usually forget to take my kids and fold clothes.

句子中'fold'是动词，缺少宾语，应该补充宾语如'clothes'。

× Yes, I've gotten my best friend's birthdays.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten my best friend's birthdays.

这里用'gotten'不合适，应该用'forgotten'表示忘记。

× I would. I would.

✓ I would feel sad.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，应该补全表达完整意思。

× I feel sad because I have the busy things so I don't remember what's the time.

✓ I feel sad because I have many busy things, so I don't remember the time.

'the busy things'用法不当，应该用'many busy things'；'what's the time'表达不自然，改为'the time'更合适。

× I'm apologize, I will.

✓ I apologize, I will try to remember.

'I'm apologize'语法错误，应该用'I apologize'；句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× I need to remember what I need to start in my daily life in the morning, afternoon, what I need to do so stay me overnight.

✓ I need to remember what I need to start in my daily life in the morning and afternoon, and what I need to do to stay overnight.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，'stay me overnight'表达错误，改为'to stay overnight'。

× Can you really remember the important things?

✓ How do you really remember important things?

回答中不应该反问考官，应该直接回答问题。

× I usually set a routine to something that I need to do in this day.

✓ I usually set a routine for things that I need to do during the day.

'set a routine to'用法错误，应该用'set a routine for'；'in this day'改为'during the day'更自然。

× I set the reminders and alarms to remind me and sometimes use the calendars to record the important things.

✓ I set reminders and alarms to remind me and sometimes use calendars to record important things.

'the reminders'和'the calendars'不需要定冠词，去掉'the'更自然。