Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多的语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“umm”等填充词，并且注意时态和冠词的正确使用。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述自己的记忆能力。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I was 12 years old, I won a memory competition in my district. I can also remember what I read for a long time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复和断断续续的表达。可以更具体地描述忘记的重要事情，并且用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, when I was travelling, I forgot to bring my mobile phone. Fortunately, I was able to go back and get it.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并且注意语法和词汇的准确性。可以具体说明需要记忆的内容和原因。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many English words and sentences because I am preparing for exams. I also have to remember math formulas to solve problems.

提案: 回答中有词汇使用错误，如“resize”应为“write”或“review”，且句子重复较多。建议使用正确的词汇，简洁表达记忆方法，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: To remember important things, I first read them aloud and repeat several times. Then, I write them down on paper and correct any mistakes. Finally, I review the notes every day, especially before going to sleep.

× I have win the prize about the memory things in the in our districts

✓ I have won the prize for memory things in our district

这里使用了现在完成时态，动词应该用过去分词形式，'win'的过去分词是'won'。此外，'in the in our districts'重复且不正确，改为'in our district'更合适。

× I have win the prize about the memory things in the in our districts

✓ I have won the prize for memory things in our district

'districts'复数形式与上下文不符，应该用单数'district'。

× I have forgot something important.

✓ I have forgotten something important.

现在完成时中，'forget'的过去分词是'forgotten'，不能用简单过去式'forgot'。

× I have mistake to take my mobile phone when I was in when I was in tourist thing

✓ I made a mistake by not taking my mobile phone when I was on a tour

这里应该用过去时态'made'表示过去发生的动作，'have mistake'不正确。

× I have mistake to take my mobile phone when I was in when I was in tourist thing

✓ I made a mistake by not taking my mobile phone when I was on a tour

'in tourist thing'表达不正确，应该用'on a tour'表示旅游。

× I need to remember a lot of English words, English 10 sentence or the Chinese sentence to improve my output in in the exam.

✓ I need to remember a lot of English words, 10 English sentences, or Chinese sentences to improve my output in the exam.

'English 10 sentence'表达不正确，数字应放在形容词前且句子应为复数形式。

× I must to remember the mathematic question about it.

✓ I must remember the math questions about it.

'must'后不加'to'，'mathematic'应为'math'或'mathematics'，且'question'应为复数形式。

× I will resize it on the paper and correct the wrong answer.

✓ I will rewrite it on the paper and correct the wrong answers.

'resize'用错，应该用'rewrite'表示重写，'answer'应为复数形式。

× Finally I will resize it before my going, before my sleeping and I will resign and will I will review it every day.

✓ Finally, I will rewrite it before going to bed and I will review it every day.

'resize'和'resign'用错，应该用'rewrite'和'review'，'before my going, before my sleeping'表达不自然，改为'before going to bed'。