Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
I wouldn't call myself the best when it comes to memorization, but I am decent, especially when the subject matter is something that is close to my heart. When that is the case, I tend to remember stuff.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Oh yeah, that happens a lot. There have been a few times where I have forgotten something important. It's just something that I skipped my mind. I do feel regret after the incident, but sometimes it's just something that we can't control and it happens.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
The key thing to remember during everyday life is that we are all human beings and that we all make mistakes. It is important for us to come back from those mistakes and start everyday with a new model that no matter what, I'm alive.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
The first thing I do is I write them down. The more important something is, the more likely I am to write it down, and after that it tends to stick to my mind. And whenever I write something down, the chances of it being prominent in my mind is extremely high, so I don't really have an issue remembering things that are important.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague words like 'stuff'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
例: I am fairly good at memorising things, especially when the topic interests me deeply. For example, I easily remember facts related to my hobbies because I am passionate about them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 70.0提案: Avoid informal expressions like 'Oh yeah' and unclear phrases such as 'skipped my mind'. Use linking words to explain reasons and feelings clearly and use more formal vocabulary.
例: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For instance, I once missed an appointment because it slipped my mind. I felt regretful afterwards, but I understand that sometimes such mistakes are unavoidable.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is philosophical but not directly related to the question. Focus on practical things you need to remember daily. Use clear examples and linking words to organize your answer.
例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as meetings, deadlines, and personal appointments. For example, I always remind myself to check my schedule every morning to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 80.0提案: Good answer with clear structure. To improve, avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to use varied vocabulary.
例: To remember important things, I usually write them down in a notebook. This method helps me focus and retain the information better, so I rarely forget important tasks.
文法
× It's just something that I skipped my mind.
✓ It's just something that slipped my mind.
The phrase 'skipped my mind' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'slipped my mind', which means to forget something temporarily. Using the correct preposition 'slipped' instead of 'skipped' is necessary for proper expression.
× start everyday with a new model that no matter what, I'm alive.
✓ start every day with a new mindset that no matter what, I'm alive.
The word 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace', but here the phrase should be 'every day' (two words) meaning 'each day'. Also, 'model' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'mindset' meaning a way of thinking. Correct preposition and word choice improve clarity.
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