Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有些冗余。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意语法，如使用正确的介词和时态。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write them down in a To-Do List to help me remember.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有重复和犹豫词。建议练习简洁明了地叙述经历，避免重复和语气词。

例: Yes, I once forgot my cellphone at the McDonald's counter because I was distracted that day.

提案: 句子结构不完整，且用词不准确。建议使用完整句子，注意冠词和形容词的正确使用，并且用更自然的表达方式。

例: I need to remember many things daily, like important phone numbers, bank card passwords, and where I put my smartphone. Among these, remembering my smartphone's location is the most important.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且清楚表达方法。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down on a To-Do List and checking it regularly.

× Not really because I usually forget some things so I take it down into the To Do List to remind myself.

✓ Not really because I usually forget some things so I write them down in the To Do List to remind myself.

The phrase 'take it down into the To Do List' is incorrect. The correct verb phrase is 'write them down in the To Do List' because 'write down' is the proper collocation for recording notes, and 'in' is the correct preposition for lists.

× It's definitely I I have forgotten my cell phones in the McDonald's order court, uh, because, uh, that day I have some important.

✓ It's definitely that I forgot my cell phone in the McDonald's order counter because that day I had something important.

The sentence incorrectly uses present perfect tense 'have forgotten' and 'have some important' when referring to a specific past event. The simple past tense 'forgot' and 'had' should be used. Also, 'cell phones' should be singular 'cell phone' and 'order court' is incorrect; it should be 'order counter'.

× There are lots of things need to remember, such as the important call numbers, the bank card passwords, and the smartphone's location, but I think the smartphone's location is the best important thing.

✓ There are lots of things to remember, such as important phone numbers, bank card passwords, and the smartphone's location, but I think the smartphone's location is the most important thing.

The phrase 'things need to remember' is missing 'to' before 'remember'. Also, 'call numbers' should be 'phone numbers'. 'Best important' is incorrect; the correct superlative is 'most important'.

× Well, I usually remember important things by writing down on A to do list and. And record it in time.

✓ Well, I usually remember important things by writing them down on a To Do List and recording them in time.

The phrase 'writing down on A to do list and. And record it in time' is grammatically incorrect. 'Writing down' should be followed by the object 'them', 'on a To Do List' uses the correct article 'a', and 'record it in time' should be 'recording them in time' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.