Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态不一致，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用统一的时态，并简洁表达观点，避免重复。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing people's names. For example, when I was in middle school, I could easily remember my classmates' names, which helped me make friends more easily.

提案: 表达不够清晰，'feel really grateful about my bad memory'用词不当。建议用更准确的表达，并补充细节说明。

例: Yes, last semester I forgot the deadline for an assignment, which caused me to fail the test. I regret this mistake and plan to record important dates in the future to avoid forgetting.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。

例: I have many things to remember daily. For instance, my mother often asks me to help with chores like sweeping the floor and closing the windows before it rains.

提案: 表达不够自然，'cultivate a good habit to remember something'和'hobby'用词不当。建议用更地道的表达方式。

例: To avoid forgetting important things, I have developed the habit of writing them down in my To-Do List. This helps me stay organized and remember tasks effectively.

× Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing people's names when I was a middle school student.

✓ Yes, I was quite good at memorizing people's names when I was a middle school student.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态"I'm quite good"，与时间状语"when I was a middle school student"不一致，需改为过去时态"I was quite good"。

× I find that I'm really good at memorizing my classmates names so I think it can help me to make friends more easily.

✓ I find that I'm really good at memorizing my classmates' names so I think it can help me to make friends more easily.

"classmates names"缺少所有格标志，应为"classmates' names"，表示“同学们的名字”。

× Yes, during the last semester I forgot my assignment deadline so I failed my test and I feel really grateful about my bad memory.

✓ Yes, during the last semester I forgot my assignment deadline so I failed my test and I felt really grateful about my bad memory.

前半句描述过去发生的事情，后半句"I feel"应与前文时态保持一致，改为过去时"I felt"。

× I feel really grateful about my bad memory.

✓ I feel really grateful for my bad memory.

表达感谢时，通常用介词"grateful for"而非"grateful about"。

× I think there are too much things which I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ I think there are too many things which I need to remember in my daily life.

"things"是可数名词，修饰词应使用"many"而非"much"，因为"much"用于不可数名词。

× For example, there are so many chores that my mom's need need me to help, such as sweeping the floor or closing windows before the rain.

✓ For example, there are so many chores that my mom needs me to help with, such as sweeping the floor or closing windows before the rain.

"my mom's need need me to help"结构错误，正确应为"my mom needs me to help with"，其中"needs"是第三人称单数动词，"help with"是固定搭配。

× such as sweeping the floor or closing windows before the rain.

✓ such as sweeping the floor or closing windows before it rains.

"before the rain"表达不自然，通常用"before it rains"表示“在下雨之前”。

× To avoid forgetting something caused by my bad memory, I cultivate a good habit to remember something.

✓ To avoid forgetting things caused by my bad memory, I have cultivated a good habit of remembering important things.

原句结构不够自然，"cultivate a good habit to remember something"表达不准确，改为"have cultivated a good habit of remembering important things"更符合英语表达习惯。

× That good hobby is to record something important to my To Do List.

✓ That good habit is to record important things in my To Do List.

"hobby"与上下文不符，应为"habit"；"something important"改为复数"important things"更合适；"to my To Do List"应改为"in my To Do List"。