Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、内容も具体的でないため、より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、具体的な例を挙げて、文法的に正しい文章を作ることが重要です。

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, I always remember my friends' birthdays and make sure to celebrate them on the right day.

提案: 回答が意味不明で文法的に誤りが多いため、質問に直接答え、具体的な状況を簡潔に説明する練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once, I forgot to do my homework for elementary school, and my teacher reminded me.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で内容が伝わりにくいため、日常生活で覚えておくべき具体的な事柄を明確に述べ、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習をしましょう。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and important information, so I always write notes on my phone or in my textbooks.

提案: 文法と表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいため、覚え方を具体的かつ自然な英語で説明する練習をしましょう。

例: I usually write down important things or repeat them out loud to help me remember.

× I have never forgotten there's bossy.

✓ I have never forgotten they're bossy.

The original sentence uses 'there's' which is a contraction of 'there is', but the intended meaning is 'they are', so the correct contraction is 'they're'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and contractions.

× I always celebrate their birthday on the day.

✓ I always celebrate their birthdays on the day.

The pronoun 'their' refers to multiple people, so the noun 'birthday' should be pluralized to 'birthdays' to agree in number.

× When I want elementary school students, I I forgot that line of the homework and the my teacher.

✓ When I was with elementary school students, I forgot that line of the homework and my teacher.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'want' should be 'was with' to indicate being with students; repeated 'I'; 'the my teacher' is incorrect, 'the' should be removed; overall sentence structure is confusing and needs correction.

× I always note. Singers in my phone or my textbooks? Yes.

✓ I always take notes. Singers in my phone or my textbooks? Yes.

The phrase 'I always note' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'I always take notes' to express the action properly. The rest of the sentence is unclear but kept as is due to lack of context.

× I always note it the important things or I say again again, I remember the using a mouth.

✓ I always note the important things or say them again and again; I remember by saying them aloud.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Note it the important things' is incorrect; it should be 'note the important things'. 'I say again again' should be 'say them again and again'. 'I remember the using a mouth' is incorrect; it should be 'I remember by saying them aloud'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.