Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear due to some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to be more concise and clear, directly answering the question with a topic sentence, followed by a supporting detail using linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'Surya's'.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because, as a mathematician, I often learn many logical expressions and formulas, which helps improve my concentration.

提案: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by correcting minor grammatical errors. Also, try to be more specific about the situation to enrich your answer.

例: Usually, I am not forgetful because I keep my things well organized. However, once I forgot my ID card, which was a necessary requirement for my entrance exam, and it caused me some trouble.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct sentence structures for clarity.

例: I always make a to-do list before my day starts so that I do not forget important tasks. Moreover, this helps me find extra time for my extracurricular activities.

提案: Your answer repeats previous information and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid repetition by adding new details or examples. Also, use linking words properly and correct grammar for better clarity.

例: I remember important things by making a to-do list every morning. This method helps me stay focused, avoid forgetting tasks, and manage my time effectively.

× Well, if I talk about my memorizing capability, I believe I'm good at it because being a mathematician I used to learn plethora of logical expressions and formulas which improves my concentration level.

✓ Well, if I talk about my memorizing capability, I believe I'm good at it because, being a mathematician, I used to learn a plethora of logical expressions and formulas which improve my concentration level.

The phrase 'being a mathematician' requires commas before and after it as it is a non-restrictive clause. 'Plethora' is a singular noun and should be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'formulas' is plural, so the verb should be 'improve' instead of 'improves' to agree in number.

× Surya's I'm quite good at it.

✓ Surely, I'm quite good at it.

The word 'Surya's' seems to be a typographical error or incorrect use of pronouns. The intended word is likely 'Surely' to express confidence.

× But I still remember a time when I forgot my ID card which was necessary requirement for my entrance exam.

✓ But I still remember a time when I forgot my ID card which was a necessary requirement for my entrance exam.

The phrase 'necessary requirement' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I always try to make A to do list before my day start so that I do not forget my important task and also able to find out or fetch out some extra time for my extracurricular activities.

✓ I always try to make a to-do list before my day starts so that I do not forget my important tasks and am also able to find or fetch some extra time for my extracurricular activities.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. 'Day start' should be 'day starts' to agree with singular subject. 'Important task' should be plural 'important tasks' to match context. The phrase 'also able to find out or fetch out' is incorrect; 'am also able to find or fetch' is correct.

× As I already mentioned that I always try to make A to do list before my day starts.

✓ As I already mentioned, I always try to make a to-do list before my day starts.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. A comma is needed after 'mentioned' to separate clauses properly.

× This really helped me a lot to stay focused and not to forget any important task and moreover this helps me in manage time management.

✓ This really helps me a lot to stay focused and not to forget any important task; moreover, this helps me manage my time effectively.

The verb tense should be present 'helps' to match the ongoing habit. 'Helps me in manage time management' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me manage my time'. Also, 'time management' is redundant here; 'manage my time' suffices. A semicolon and commas improve sentence clarity.