Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用正确的时态和表达方式。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because many events happen during the day, so I often forget some details.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子重复且用词不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达并避免重复。

例: I usually don't forget important things because I make sure to remember them. Sometimes, I write them down as reminders.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，建议理清思路，使用简单明了的句子表达日常需要记住的事项。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the tasks I have to do, their deadlines, and how much time I need to complete them.

提案: 回答内容完整，但句子略显重复，建议使用更流畅的表达并适当使用连接词。

例: I remember important things by using my phone. I use apps or Excel to write them down, so I can easily check them whenever I need. It's very convenient.

× Well, I think I'm not good at memorizing things because it will have more things happened in the day and I will easy to forget what happened.

✓ Well, I think I'm not good at memorizing things because more things happen during the day and I will easily forget what happened.

这里错误在于动词形式和副词使用。'will have more things happened' 应改为 'more things happen'，因为描述的是一般现在时的事实；'easy' 应改为副词 'easily' 来修饰动词 'forget'。建议注意动词时态和副词的正确使用。

× No, I don't forget the important thing. If I know The thing is important, I will remember it, and sometimes I will write it down to warn myself to remember this.

✓ No, I don't forget important things. If I know something is important, I will remember it, and sometimes I will write it down to remind myself to remember it.

这里'singular and plural issue'，'the important thing' 应改为复数 'important things'，因为通常指多件重要的事情；'The thing' 应改为 'something' 更自然；'warn myself' 应改为 'remind myself'，因为提醒自己用remind更合适。建议注意单复数和词汇搭配。

× I think in my daily life I should remember the I do and what the deadline in this world and how long if I can finish this work.

✓ I think in my daily life I should remember what I do, the deadlines, and how long it will take me to finish the work.

句子结构混乱，缺少必要的连接词和完整表达。'the I do' 应改为 'what I do'；'what the deadline in this world' 应改为 'the deadlines'；'how long if I can finish this work' 应改为 'how long it will take me to finish the work'。建议理清句子结构，使用完整的从句表达。

× I will remember the important things by using my phone. I will use some apps or excel to help me to write down the important things and I can watch it when I use the phone. It is very convenient.

✓ I will remember important things by using my phone. I use some apps or Excel to help me write down important things, and I can check them when I use my phone. It is very convenient.

'watch it' 用词不当，应改为 'check them'，因为查看信息用check更合适；'help me to write down' 中 'to' 可省略；'the important things' 改为 'important things' 更自然。建议注意介词和动词搭配的正确使用。