Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达重复且语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially when I have to remember a lot quickly during exams. I often find it difficult to recall all the information I need.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，内容不完整。建议使用连贯的句子，清晰描述事件，并避免重复和断句错误。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, last week my friend asked me to deliver a shirt to her, but I forgot and didn't give it to her on time.

提案: 回答缺乏流畅性，语法和词汇使用不当。建议简洁表达日常需要记住的事情，使用正确的时态和词汇。

例: I need to remember to write in my diary every day, but I often forget. I stopped writing last week, but I plan to start again today.

提案: 表达不清且语法错误较多。建议明确说明记忆方法，使用连贯句子和恰当词汇。

例: I don't have special techniques to remember important things. I try to repeat them several times, like when I learn English words, but sometimes it's still hard to remember.

× I'm not really good at memories and things.

✓ I'm not really good at memory and things.

这里'memories'应使用不可数名词'memory'，表示记忆能力。'Memories'通常指具体的回忆，复数形式不适合此处。

× the time I have to remember seeing in a very rapid speed

✓ the time I have to remember things at a very rapid speed

动词'remember'后面接动名词时，表示回忆做过的事；此处应表达记忆事物，需用名词或名词短语，且'seeing'不合适，改为'things'更准确。

× I can't memorize the things I need to examine.

✓ I can't memorize the things I need to remember for the exam.

'examine'是动词，句中应使用名词'exam'表示考试。

× I forget I have forgotten it and I haven't delivered the shirt she wanted, luckily the shirt she.

✓ I forgot I had forgotten it and I haven't delivered the shirt she wanted, luckily the shirt she wanted was not urgent.

时态混乱，'forget'应为过去式'forgot'，'have forgotten'改为过去完成时'had forgotten'，以表示先发生的动作。句子末尾不完整，需补充完整表达。

× but however I always forget it.

✓ but I always forget it.

'but'和'however'都表示转折，不能连用，选择其中一个即可。

× this week I haven't write anything

✓ this week I haven't written anything

'have'后接过去分词，'write'应改为过去分词'written'。

× keep it in the right rewrite today.

✓ keep it up and rewrite it today.

'keep it in the right rewrite'表达不清，'keep it up'表示坚持，'rewrite it'表示重写，更符合语境。

× I don't have any any skills help me remember important things

✓ I don't have any skills to help me remember important things

重复使用'any'是错误的，且缺少不定式'to'引导目的状语。

× Speed is one time at one time, just like I remember the English words.

✓ I review the English words one time at a time.

原句结构混乱，'Speed is one time at one time'无意义，改为表达复习单词的正确方式。

× I just only renewed it once and once and I couldn't remember it very good.

✓ I only reviewed it once, and I couldn't remember it very well.

'renewed'用词错误，应为'reviewed'，'good'应改为副词'well'修饰动词。