Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免使用错误的副词形式。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things quickly and accurately.

提案: 回答内容不合适且不清晰，缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题并提供具体例子。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, like my appointment or keys.

提案: 回答结构混乱，表达不连贯。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I need to remember to take my phone with me when I go out because it's very important.

提案: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议使用简单明了的句子，说明具体方法并使用连接词。

例: When I need to remember something important, I write it down in my reminder app, which helps me not to forget.

× No, I'm not a person who could memorize things fastly and clearly.

✓ No, I'm not a person who could memorize things fast and clearly.

fastly 不是正确的副词形式，正确的副词是 fast。fastly 是错误用法。

× Sure, I've forgotten my boyfriend. Yes, I have it.

✓ Sure, I've forgotten something important. Yes, I have.

这里的 'my boyfriend' 与问题不符，且 'I have it' 用法不当，应改为 'I have' 或更合适的表达。

× Well, I think. I need to remember, take my phones when I need to go out to the door. It's very important.

✓ Well, I think I need to remember to take my phone when I go out. It's very important.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性，'take my phones' 应为单数 'phone'，'go out to the door' 不自然，应简化为 'go out'。

× Actually when something needed I choose, I have to remember it.

✓ Actually, when something needs to be done, I have to remember it.

句子结构不完整，时态和语态使用错误，'something needed I choose' 不符合英语表达习惯，应改为 'something needs to be done'。

× You could remind me to to remember it.

✓ I use reminder apps to help me remember it.

'You could remind me' 与上下文不符，且重复 'to'，应改为更自然的表达方式。