Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有些重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免使用“literally”这种口语化且不必要的词汇，同时注意时态和语法的正确性。

例: I am not very good at memorizing things. Since childhood, I have found it difficult to remember information, which often frustrates me.

提案: 回答内容较好，但语法错误影响表达效果。建议注意主谓一致，如“everyone has”，并且可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Of course, everyone has forgotten something important at some point. For example, when I was in junior high school, I forgot to tell my parents about an important event, which made me feel very frustrated.

提案: 回答不完整且缺乏具体细节。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并提供更多具体内容。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. For example, in my studies, I have to remember the schedule and content of my courses, as well as deadlines for assignments.

提案: 回答较好，但句子结构稍显重复。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并简化句子。

例: I like to remember important things by making lists on my phone. This simple method helps me check the list whenever I need to recall something.

× I would say I'm literally not good at memorizing things because it's from the childhood to adulthood.

✓ I would say I'm literally not good at memorizing things because I have been like this from childhood to adulthood.

句中表达“it's from the childhood to adulthood”时态和结构不正确，应使用现在完成时态表达从过去到现在的持续状态。建议改为“I have been like this from childhood to adulthood”，表示从童年到成年一直如此。

× I just always can't memorize things easily which frustrated me a lot.

✓ I just always can't memorize things easily, which frustrates me a lot.

句中“which frustrated me a lot”时态不一致，前半句为现在时，后半句应保持一致，故用现在时“frustrates”。

× I believe that everyone have ever forgotten something significant.

✓ I believe that everyone has ever forgotten something significant.

主语“everyone”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而非复数“have”。

× I forgot to tell my parents to attend an important event.

✓ I forgot to tell my parents about attending an important event.

动词“tell”后应接宾语和介词短语，表达“告诉父母参加重要活动”，应使用“tell my parents about attending an important event”。

× Actually, there are a lot of incidents I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ Actually, there are a lot of things I need to remember in my daily life.

“incidents”通常指事件，语境中更合适用“things”表示需要记住的事项，更符合口语表达习惯。

× As for my study, I need to remember the time of the courses, the content of the courses and.

✓ As for my study, I need to remember the time of the courses and the content of the courses.

句子结尾“and”后缺少内容，造成句子不完整，应去掉“and”或补充完整内容。

× I enjoy remembering important things using lists because it is a very simple way for me to make a list on my phone and when I need to remember something I will look at my phone, the list.

✓ I enjoy remembering important things by using lists because it is a very simple way for me to make a list on my phone, and when I need to remember something, I will look at the list on my phone.

句子结构混乱，缺少适当的连接词和标点，建议调整为更清晰的表达，使用“by using lists”表示方式，分句之间用逗号和连词连接，避免重复和歧义。