Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because it helps me learn more about subjects like history and geography. Additionally, I often practice memory exercises to keep my brain sharp.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'I have ever'.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially when I am very busy or stressed. For example, once I forgot to submit an assignment because I was overwhelmed with other tasks.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ 'schedule' nhiều lần và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'many homeworks' thành 'a lot of homework'. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my busy timetable because I have many classes and a lot of homework, which can make me feel tired and confused.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu rõ ràng, ví dụ như 'I'm taking note' và 'blend my schedule'. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể cách bạn ghi chú hoặc sắp xếp thời gian.

例: I usually write important things in a notebook to help me remember them. Also, I organize my study schedule carefully because I have a busy routine.

× Well, I think I'm taking note in the notebook is a good way to remember important things and I usually blend my schedule to study well and I have a hectic schedule so it is a good.

✓ Well, I think taking notes in the notebook is a good way to remember important things, and I usually plan my schedule to study well. I have a hectic schedule, so it is good.

The phrase 'I'm taking note' is incorrect because 'taking note' should be in the gerund form 'taking notes' to function as a noun phrase. Also, 'blend my schedule' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'plan' when referring to organizing a schedule. Additionally, the sentence structure is improved by splitting into clearer sentences. Suggestions: Use 'taking notes' instead of 'I'm taking note' and 'plan my schedule' instead of 'blend my schedule'.

× I have a hectic schedule and I'm so exhausted and confused in my classes and many homeworks.

✓ I have a hectic schedule and I'm so exhausted and confused in my classes and have a lot of homework.

The word 'homeworks' is incorrect because 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Instead, use 'homework' or 'a lot of homework' to express quantity. Suggestions: Replace 'many homeworks' with 'a lot of homework'.

× Yes, sometime I have ever forgotten something important because it lasts all day and my parents remind me to relax and I'm very confused to.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have forgotten something important because it lasts all day, and my parents remind me to relax. I get very confused too.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'have ever forgotten' is incorrect; 'have forgotten' is sufficient in present perfect tense. The phrase 'I'm very confused to' is incorrect; it should be 'I get very confused too.' Suggestions: Use 'sometimes' instead of 'sometime', remove 'ever' after 'have', and replace 'I'm very confused to' with 'I get very confused too'.