Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I am quite good at remembering people's faces and song lyrics. However, I often forget things I need to bring or study for exams because I tend to remember only interesting information.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但语法错误较多，句子衔接不够自然。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词如"so"、"but"等，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot my best friend's birthday and only remembered it the next day. I felt very guilty, so I bought her a big cake to make up for it. Luckily, she forgave me. Since then, I have been using my phone calendar to remind me of important dates.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“get masks”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇，注意介词搭配，并且避免模糊表达。

例: As a student, I need to remember deadlines for each subject, class schedules, and what to prepare for lessons. I also have to keep track of group presentations and meetings. If I forget these, I might face penalties, so I rely heavily on calendars.

提案: 回答较简短且有语法错误，如“may forgot”应为“may forget”。建议丰富内容，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并避免不必要的口语化表达如“Thank you”。

例: I usually set reminders on my phone or write notes in my calendar to remember important things. Without these tools, I might forget many tasks. Therefore, I try to stay organized, and technology helps me a lot.

× But I always forgot what I need to bring and what I study for the exam.

✓ But I always forget what I need to bring and what I study for the exam.

这里描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。"forgot"是过去时，应该改为"forget"。

× So I think I'm just kind of person will forgot the boring things I can only remember.

✓ So I think I'm just the kind of person who will forget the boring things I can only remember.

"kind of person"前缺少定冠词"the"，且"forgot"应为动词原形"forget"，因为后面有助动词"will"。此外，缺少关系代词"who"。

× Once I forgot my best friend's birthday and I just remember it in the next day.

✓ Once I forgot my best friend's birthday and I just remembered it the next day.

前半句是过去时"forgot"，后半句也应使用过去时，"remember"应改为过去式"remembered"。"in the next day"应改为"the next day"。

× I feel so guilty about that so I brought her a big cake try to make up for it.

✓ I felt so guilty about that so I bought her a big cake to try to make up for it.

描述过去的感受和动作，"feel"应改为过去式"felt"，"brought"应改为"bought"（买蛋糕），且"try"前应加不定式标志"to"。

× after that I tried to use my a phone calendar to remind me everything.

✓ After that I tried to use my phone calendar to remind me of everything.

"my a phone calendar"中冠词重复，应去掉"a"。"remind me everything"应改为"remind me of everything"，动词"remind"后需加介词"of"。

× I need to remember every subject deadline, the subject calendars and also what I need to prepare for each class.

✓ I need to remember every subject deadline, the subject calendar and also what I need to prepare for each class.

"subject calendars"前已有定冠词"the"，应为单数形式"calendar"，保持一致。

× And I also need to keep track on the group presentation and meetings.

✓ And I also need to keep track of the group presentation and meetings.

短语"keep track"后应接介词"of"，而不是"on"。

× If I forgot some of them I will get masks.

✓ If I forget some of them I will get marks.

"forgot"应为一般现在时"forget"，因为条件句描述习惯或可能发生的情况。"masks"应为"marks"，根据语境应为"分数"。

× If I don't do that I may forgot half of them.

✓ If I don't do that I may forget half of them.

情态动词"may"后应接动词原形，"forgot"应改为"forget"。