Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'forget' and 'remembering', you can combine ideas more naturally.

例: No, I wouldn't say I'm good at memorizing things because I often forget where I keep my belongings and also struggle to remember people's names and faces.

提案: Your answer is relevant and well-structured but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating 'and' too much by using connectors like 'which' or 'therefore'.

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I stay organized by using to-do lists and planners on my phone, which have helped me a lot.

提案: Your answer needs grammatical correction and clearer linking. Use plural forms correctly and connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about the tasks and responsibilities.

例: In my daily life, I need to keep track of my work-related tasks and responsibilities, such as responding to customers and replying to emails, which are crucial.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect sentences smoothly. Also, use consistent articles and plural forms.

例: I usually use to-do lists and planners on my phone to prioritize my tasks and responsibilities, which helps me stay organized and remember important things.

× In my daily life, I need to keep track of my tasks and responsibility related to my work and it is crucial to respond my customers and an e-mail.

✓ In my daily life, I need to keep track of my tasks and responsibilities related to my work, and it is crucial to respond to my customers and emails.

The phrase 'respond my customers and an e-mail' is incorrect because the verb 'respond' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' to match 'tasks'. Additionally, 'an e-mail' should be plural 'emails' to be consistent with 'customers'. The sentence also needs a comma before 'and' to separate two independent clauses.

× I usually use A to do list and planners on my phone to visualize the priority of my tasks and responsibilities.

✓ I usually use a to-do list and planners on my phone to visualize the priority of my tasks and responsibilities.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun. Articles should be lowercase unless at the beginning of a sentence.