Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“need to remembered”应为“needed to remember”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达，并避免冗长。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was in middle school, I often struggled to remember historical events quickly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，如“since that since during that days”重复且错误。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态和连词的正确使用。

例: Yes, I once forgot to take an important exam because I was very busy with other tasks at that time. It was a stressful experience.

提案: 回答较为完整且内容具体，但句子较长，建议适当拆分句子，使表达更清晰自然。同时可以增加一些连接词使逻辑更连贯。

例: As a student, I need to remember the exact time of my classes because punctuality is important. Also, I keep track of homework deadlines to avoid losing marks. For example, I set reminders on my phone to stay organized.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，有语法和句子结构错误。建议简化表达，明确说明使用的工具和方法，避免重复和断句错误。

例: I usually use my phone to set reminders. There are many convenient apps that notify me when I need to remember something important.

× That is because I still remember when I was studying the middle school and every time we need to remembered all the events of our history and I cannot remember quickly.

✓ That is because I still remember when I was studying middle school and every time we needed to remember all the events of our history and I could not remember quickly.

句中“need to remembered”时态错误，应为过去时“needed to remember”，因为描述的是过去的情况。动词“remembered”是过去式，但这里应使用动词不定式“remember”。另外，“cannot”应改为过去时“could not”，与上下文时态一致。

× Certainly I still remember that there was a time I had an examination. However, since that since during that days I had a lot of things to do, so I forgot to take the exam.

✓ Certainly I still remember that there was a time I had an examination. However, since during those days I had a lot of things to do, I forgot to take the exam.

“since that since during that days”结构重复且“that days”应为复数“those days”。“so”在此句中多余，去掉更符合英语表达习惯。

× Well, for me, I will always use my to set reminders.

✓ Well, for me, I will always use my phone to set reminders.

句中缺少名词“phone”，导致句子不完整。应补充完整表达。

× I think there was. I think there are some apps really convenient for me to set the reminders and it can remind me when I need to.

✓ I think there are some apps that are really convenient for me to set reminders and they can remind me when I need to.

句子结构不完整，“I think there was.”不完整，应删除或补充。缺少关系代词“that”引导定语从句，且“it”应改为复数“they”与“apps”一致。