Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ: "memory the long list" nên là "memorising long lists"). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising important things like personal experiences, but I sometimes find it difficult to memorise long lists such as phone numbers or historical dates.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có câu chuyện cụ thể, tuy nhiên câu cuối cùng hơi thiếu liên kết và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác ("Sad then I always double check" nên là "Since then, I always double-check"). Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, definitely. Once, I forgot my ID card on the day of a financial exam, which was a disaster. I had to rush home and return before the test started. Since then, I always double-check my bag to avoid such problems.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi về từ vựng và cấu trúc ("deadline meetings" nên là "deadlines or meetings"; "encouraging clothes" không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

例: I need to remember small but important things like deadlines, meetings, and even simple tasks such as drinking enough water. I also try to keep positive reminders to stay motivated throughout the day.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời rõ ràng và có nội dung cụ thể, nhưng cụm từ "clearing the apps" không rõ nghĩa trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually rely on digital tools such as phone alerts and sticky notes. For academic purposes, I use flashcards and spaced repetition, which help me remember information more effectively.

× I sometimes struggle with memory the long list like phone numbers or historical dates.

✓ I sometimes struggle with memorising long lists like phone numbers or historical dates.

The phrase 'memory the long list' is incorrect. 'Memory' is a noun and does not fit here; the correct verb is 'memorising' to express the action of remembering lists. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple items. This correction addresses singular/plural issues and verb usage.

× Sad then I always double check my bag before.

✓ Since then, I have always double-checked my bag beforehand.

The original sentence lacks proper tense and structure. 'Sad then' is incorrect; it should be 'Since then' to indicate time from past to present. 'Double check' should be in past participle form 'double-checked' because of the present perfect tense 'have always double-checked'. 'Before' is better replaced with 'beforehand' for clarity. This correction addresses past tense and sentence structure issues.

× Mostly small but essential things like deadline meetings or even simple stuff like drinking enough water.

✓ Mostly small but essential things like meeting deadlines or even simple stuff like drinking enough water.

The phrase 'deadline meetings' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'meeting deadlines' where 'meeting' is a verb and 'deadlines' is plural. This correction addresses incorrect use of prepositions and noun phrases.

× I also try to remember encouraging clothes or reminders to stay positive throughout the day.

✓ I also try to remember encouraging quotes or reminders to stay positive throughout the day.

The word 'clothes' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'quotes' or 'thoughts' that encourage positivity. This is an incorrect use of adjectives/nouns. The correction replaces 'clothes' with 'quotes' to make sense in context.

× I usually rely on digital tools like phone alerts, clearing the apps, and sticky notes.

✓ I usually rely on digital tools like phone alerts, calendar apps, and sticky notes.

The phrase 'clearing the apps' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intends to refer to 'calendar apps' or similar digital tools. This correction addresses incorrect use of prepositions and word choice for clarity.