Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和不连贯的问题。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I consider myself a consistent learner, so when I need to remember something, I practice it regularly to improve.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地描述事件，注意时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot about an important meeting. When my boss called me, I immediately realized my mistake and apologized to everyone involved.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句型和时态，明确说明记忆内容，并说明具体方法。

例: As a product manager, I need to remember many tasks and deadlines. Therefore, I usually take notes to remind myself of everything I have to do.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，存在语法错误和不连贯的问题。建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，避免无关内容，使用正确的语法和词汇。

例: I usually write important things down on my phone and computer. This way, I can check my notes anytime to make sure I don't forget anything.

× I consider myself to be a learning, consistent person.

✓ I consider myself to be a quick learner and consistent person.

这里 'learning' 用作形容词不合适，应该用名词 'learner' 来表达“学习者”的意思。'quick learner' 是常用表达，表示学习能力强。

× When I need to memorize something, I will always keep practice.

✓ When I need to memorize something, I will always keep practicing.

动词 'keep' 后面应接动名词形式，表示持续进行某动作，故 'practice' 应改为 'practicing'。

× There was one time I forgot my meeting schedule and when my boss called me I start I started thinking about it and I was like say sorry to everyone.

✓ There was one time I forgot my meeting schedule, and when my boss called me, I started thinking about it and I was like saying sorry to everyone.

句中 'start' 应为过去式 'started'，且 'was like say sorry' 结构不正确，'was like' 后应接动名词 'saying'。

× Since I work as a product manager, I need to remember many things and I will take notes and keep me remind of everything I need to do.

✓ Since I work as a product manager, I need to remember many things, so I take notes to remind myself of everything I need to do.

'keep me remind' 结构错误，正确表达应为 'remind myself'，即用反身代词 'myself'。

× I will keep a note on my and computer when I feel I was something forgotten.

✓ I will keep a note on my phone and computer when I feel I have forgotten something.

'on my and computer' 结构不完整，应补充 'phone'，且时态应为现在完成时 'have forgotten'。

× I will get back to Luke Wise right?

✓ I will get back to Luke Wise, right?

句末应加逗号以分隔主句和附加疑问，且 'right' 用作附加疑问时前面应有逗号。