Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（"I always to remember"），表达不够自然，且内容较为简单。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇和句式。

例: I would say my memory is average. Sometimes, I need to review information several times to remember it properly, just like most people.

提案: 回答较为完整且内容具体，但可以通过增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富词汇以提升表达效果。

例: Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday because I was snowed under with work and completely lost track of the date. Therefore, I now always set reminders on my phone for important events to avoid such mistakes.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，句子结构较为重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并尝试提供更具体的细节。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember deadlines, meeting times, and shopping lists. Additionally, I try to keep track of appointments and people's birthdays by writing them down; otherwise, I tend to forget them.

提案: 回答表达较为清晰，但存在语法和用词小错误（如"a clock on in my phone"），建议注意语法准确性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I usually repeat important information in my mind to remember it. Besides, I set reminders and alarms on my phone, and sometimes I write notes and stick them in visible places to ensure I don't forget.

× Like other people, I always to remember things twice or even more times to remember it.

✓ Like other people, I always have to remember things twice or even more times to remember them.

句中缺少动词have，导致动词不定式to remember使用错误，应为have to remember表示“必须记住”。此外，最后的it应改为them，因为things是复数。

× Like other people, I always to remember things twice or even more times to remember it.

✓ Like other people, I always have to remember things twice or even more times to remember them.

things是复数，指代时应使用复数代词them，而不是单数it。

× I also try to remember appointments and people's birthday.

✓ I also try to remember appointments and people's birthdays.

birthday应为复数birthdays，因为people是复数，表示多个人的生日。

× Sometimes I write it down and stick it to some somewhere very obvious to see.

✓ Sometimes I write it down and stick it somewhere very obvious to see.

stick后面不需要介词to，直接加地点副词somewhere即可。