Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，时态使用不准确，且表达重复。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致性。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often feel tired and exhausted when I try to remember too much information.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地描述忘记的重要事情，并使用正确的时态。

例: Yes, I once forgot that I had an important exam, so I missed it and had to review the material again.

提案: 回答较为直接，但缺少连接词和细节。建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明任务内容。

例: I need to remember to do my homework and other daily tasks, such as reading books, writing essays, and doing housework.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加细节和连接词，使表达更自然。

例: I usually make a list and write down my important tasks so that I don't forget anything.

× I'm not good at memorizing things because if I memorize too much, I think I was too tired and exhausted.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things because if I memorize too much, I think I am too tired and exhausted.

这里的时态应该保持一致，描述现在的状态时应使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。原句中使用了“was”，应改为“am”。

× Yes, umm, I remembered that that is morning and I forgot passing an exam and uh, I need to review it, reviewed it again.

✓ Yes, umm, I remember that it was morning and I forgot to pass an exam and uh, I need to review it again.

这里涉及多个时态错误。首先，“remembered”应改为一般现在时“remember”，因为是在描述记忆的事实。其次，“that that is morning”表达不清，应改为“that it was morning”，保持时态一致。再者，“forgot passing an exam”应改为“forgot to pass an exam”，动词搭配错误。最后，“reviewed it again”应改为“review it again”，保持时态一致。

× I must remember to do my homework and some tasks such as reading, writing or doing housework.

✓ I must remember to do my homework and some tasks such as reading, writing, or doing housework.

在列举多个动作时，最后两个动作之间应使用逗号和连词“or”连接，原句缺少逗号，影响句子清晰度。

× I will make a list and write my important tasks and things on it.

✓ I will make a list and write my important tasks and things on it.

该句时态正确，无需修改。