Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, I do not think I'm good at memorizing things, uh, because most of the time I forget, uh, the things, umm, that I need to do uh, and I also forget, uh, things, uh, like, umm, like my phone.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, I've forgotten my phone at my home on my college day and I have various uses of phone during my classes. But because I forget the I forgot the phone, it was very difficult to complete those tasks.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
It is important to remember in my daily, daily life that a purpose should be there for everything. And I should also remember that, uh, I should work hard, uh, for completing my tasks, uh, and daily activities.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I prefer to take notes of important things so I do not forget to complete those things. I also like to put a reminder in my phone so that the phone can help me to.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 60.0提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, keep your answer concise and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence followed by a supporting detail.
例: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget important tasks and even personal items like my phone.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 70.0提案: Try to structure your answer clearly by starting with a direct response, then explain the situation using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid repetition and grammatical errors for better clarity.
例: Yes, I once forgot my phone at home on a college day, and because I rely on it for many tasks during classes, it was very difficult to complete them without it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and avoiding repetition and filler words. Provide specific examples of what you need to remember daily to enrich your response.
例: In my daily life, I need to remember my goals and work hard to complete my tasks and activities efficiently.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by combining sentences using linking words for better flow. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly and provide a complete thought.
例: I prefer to take notes of important things and set reminders on my phone so that it helps me remember to complete my tasks on time.
文法
× Yes, I've forgotten my phone at my home on my college day and I have various uses of phone during my classes.
✓ Yes, I forgot my phone at home on my college day and I used my phone for various purposes during my classes.
The sentence mixes present perfect tense ('I've forgotten') with past events. Since the event happened in the past and is completed, simple past tense 'forgot' is appropriate. Also, 'have various uses of phone' is incorrect; it should be 'used my phone for various purposes' to correctly express past habitual actions.
× But because I forget the I forgot the phone, it was very difficult to complete those tasks.
✓ But because I forgot the phone, it was very difficult to complete those tasks.
The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'forget' alongside past tense 'forgot'. To maintain consistency and clarity about a past event, 'forgot' should be used throughout. Also, the phrase 'I forget the I forgot the phone' contains a repetition error that needs correction.
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