Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details easily, especially when I'm distracted.

提案: 时态使用不准确，表达略显简单。建议注意时态一致性，并增加细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday party last year because I was very busy studying, and I felt really sorry about it.

提案: 句子结构不够清晰，缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

例: I need to remember important things like test deadlines and appointments because they are essential. Also, I always make sure to bring my books, phone, and homework with me.

提案: 代词使用错误，表达不清晰。建议正确使用代词，并具体说明使用的应用程序。

例: I use my mobile phone to record important appointments because it's very convenient and saves me a lot of time. Sometimes, I also use reminder apps that help me stay organized.

× Last year I even forget my friend's birthday party because I was busy with my study at that time.

✓ Last year I even forgot my friend's birthday party because I was busy with my study at that time.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应该用过去式。forget的过去式是forgot，使用forget是时态错误。

× I think he is very convenient and save lots of time.

✓ I think it is very convenient and saves lots of time.

这里指代的是手机，应该用it而不是he；同时主语是it，动词要用第三人称单数形式saves。

× Sometimes I use last apps. I think he's very suitable for me.

✓ Sometimes I use some apps. I think they're very suitable for me.

这里的last apps不合适，应该用some apps；且apps是复数，代词应使用they而不是he。