Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，同时用更连贯的句子表达观点。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, which often causes problems. For example, one night I was listening to something important, but I easily forgot the main idea and had to ask someone else to explain it to me.

提案: 回答内容具体，但存在重复和语法错误。建议避免重复词汇，注意句子流畅性，并使用更准确的表达方式。

例: Yes, last weekend I forgot my best friend's birthday. I blame my phone because I set a reminder, but it didn't notify me in time.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，表达更自然流畅。

例: I usually need to remember daily tasks. For instance, this morning my mother told me to pick up a bag she prepared for me to take to my grandparents, but I forgot to do it.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子连接不够自然。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更连贯，同时注意语法准确性。

例: For very important things, I repeat them in my mind several times so they become rooted in my memory and are harder to forget. Also, I always set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

× I was easily forgot the main idea and I need to someone else competed it for me.

✓ I easily forgot the main idea and I needed someone else to complete it for me.

这里的动词时态使用错误。'was easily forgot' 应改为过去式 'easily forgot'，'need' 应改为过去式 'needed'，'competed' 应为 'complete' 的正确形式。建议注意动词的时态一致性。

× I need to someone else competed it for me.

✓ I needed someone else to complete it for me.

'need to someone else competed' 结构不正确，应该是 'needed someone else to complete'，即动词后接宾语和不定式。建议学习动词搭配和宾语结构。

× I blame it blame it on the on my phone because I set it a reminder but it didn't didn't remind me in time.

✓ I blamed it on my phone because I set a reminder but it didn't remind me in time.

动词时态应为过去式，'blame' 应为 'blamed'，重复词 'blame it' 和 'didn't didn't' 应删除。建议注意时态和避免重复。

× I blame it blame it on the on my phone because I set it a reminder but it didn't didn't remind me in time.

✓ I blamed it on my phone because I set a reminder but it didn't remind me in time.

'on the on my phone' 中 'the' 多余，应删除。建议注意介词短语的正确使用。

× Basically it's some kind of daily things.

✓ Basically it's some kind of daily thing.

'some kind of' 后应接单数名词，'things' 应改为单数 'thing'。建议注意单复数搭配。

× Like my mother told me this morning that I need to pick the bag which she prepared for me to take it to my grandparents, but I forgot that.

✓ Like my mother told me this morning that I need to pick the bag which she prepared for me to take to my grandparents, but I forgot that.

'take it to my grandparents' 中 'it' 多余，应删除。建议注意代词的必要性。

× For some very important things, I just think it over and over, so it kind of rooted in my brain, so it's not easy to forget as something else.

✓ For some very important things, I just think it over and over, so it kind of gets rooted in my brain, so it's not as easy to forget as something else.

'rooted' 应用现在时 'gets rooted'，'not easy to forget as something else' 应为 'not as easy to forget as something else'。建议注意时态和比较结构。