Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言较为自然，但有些表达不够简洁，且缺少连接词使内容显得有些断裂。建议在回答中使用连接词如"and"或"also"来使句子更连贯，同时避免重复信息。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, during law school, I memorised three textbooks in five days for my final exams and achieved high scores. Additionally, I can remember everyone's birthdays and star signs, which helps me connect with people better.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。同时，注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: I rarely forget anything important, especially at work, because I always organise my tasks carefully. However, once I forgot my best friend's birthday during a very busy week, which made me feel quite guilty.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但表达略显零散，缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词将句子连接起来，使回答更流畅，同时避免口语化的表达。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important work deadlines, such as submitting legal papers within 24 hours and quarterly dates. Besides that, I also keep track of my daily study notes and remind my boyfriend to watch his weight.

提案: 回答中存在重复和不连贯的问题，且表达不够清晰。建议避免重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并清楚说明使用的工具或方法。

例: I don't force myself to remember things because my brain naturally keeps track of important stuff. However, for backups, I use WeChat reminders to help me remember meetings and tasks.

× I rarely forgot anything important.

✓ I rarely forget anything important.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时，表示习惯性动作，因此动词应使用一般现在时。将过去式forgot改为现在式forget。

× I always make sure to organize my works carefully.

✓ I always make sure to organize my work carefully.

work作为不可数名词，表示工作内容时不加复数-s。将works改为work。

× However, once I've got my best friend's birthday, join in and very busy week, which made me feel quite guilty.

✓ However, once I missed my best friend's birthday because I was very busy that week, which made me feel quite guilty.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且表达不清。需要补充动词missed，调整句子结构，使句意明确。

× Like having to hand illegal papers within 24 hours, quarter dates, stuff like that.

✓ Like having to hand in legal papers within 24 hours, quarter dates, stuff like that.

illegal意为非法的，语境应为合法文件，故应为legal。hand illegal papers语义错误，应为hand in legal papers。

× Oh, and reminding my boyfriend to watch his weight.

✓ Oh, and reminding my boyfriend to watch his weight is important.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。补充谓语动词is important，使句子完整。

× I don't push myself to remember things For important stuff, my brain just automatically keeps track of them.

✓ I don't push myself to remember things. For important stuff, my brain just automatically keeps track of them.

原句中两句话之间缺少标点，导致句子连贯性差。添加句号分隔两句，使表达清晰。

× I use WeChat remembers for meetings or tasks.

✓ I use WeChat reminders for meetings or tasks.

remembers不是名词，正确名词应为reminders，表示提醒。将remembers改为reminders。