Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“good at remember”应为“good at remembering”，且表达不够简洁自然。建议使用更准确的时态和动名词形式，避免重复和犹豫词汇，使回答更流畅。

例: I am quite good at memorising, especially when it comes to remembering locations and important numbers. For example, I can easily recall addresses and phone numbers that I use frequently.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“forgot my”后缺少宾语，且时态混乱。建议完整表达事件，使用正确时态，并增加细节使内容更具体。

例: Yes, I once forgot my passport when I traveled to Beijing with my parents as a child. It was a terrible experience, so I started using notes and reminders to improve my memory.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“deadline for my coursework when I'm studying”应简化为“coursework deadlines”。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，避免口语化的填充词，增加连贯性。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important deadlines for my coursework and appointments with my tutors. Additionally, I always try to remember my family members' birthdays.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和重复，如“write it down on the paper like I write a timeline”。建议简化表达，使用更自然的句子，并减少犹豫词。

例: I usually write important tasks on paper, creating a timeline for myself. I also use phone apps like The Days Matter to track important dates and deadlines.

× So I would say I'm good at remember things partially, uh, especially when I need to memorize, uh, a certain location and a new study that I would travel to.

✓ So I would say I'm good at remembering things partially, uh, especially when I need to memorize, uh, a certain location and a new study that I would travel to.

动词短语 'good at' 后面应接动名词形式，不能用动词原形。这里 'remember' 应改为 'remembering'。

× And I'm good at memorize, uh, some certain numbers.

✓ And I'm good at memorizing, uh, some certain numbers.

同样，'good at' 后应接动名词，'memorize' 应改为 'memorizing'。

× Yes, I did forget my when I traveled to Beijing with my parents as a kid.

✓ Yes, I did forget something when I traveled to Beijing with my parents as a kid.

句子中 'forget my' 后缺少宾语，导致句子结构不完整，应补充宾语使句子完整。

× So I think I really forget things when I was older.

✓ So I think I really forgot things when I was older.

句中描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去式 'forgot'，而非现在时 'forget'。

× Well, the most important thing I need to remember is that the deadline for my coursework when I'm studying in the college as well as some very important arrangement with my tutors and professors.

✓ Well, the most important thing I need to remember is the deadline for my coursework when I'm studying at college as well as some very important arrangements with my tutors and professors.

介词 'in the college' 应改为 'at college'，且 'arrangement' 应为复数 'arrangements'，表示多个安排。

× So I would say it is very also important to remember my family members birthdays.

✓ So I would say it is also very important to remember my family members' birthdays.

副词 'also' 和 'very' 的顺序错误，应为 'also very important'；'family members birthdays' 应加所有格，改为 'family members' birthdays'。

× Well, I would write it down on the paper like I write a timeline for myself and I also use some phone apps like The Days Matter to remember some very important dates and that will remind me how many days I still left to, uh, complete the task.

✓ Well, I would write it down on paper like I write a timeline for myself and I also use some phone apps like The Days Matter to remember some very important dates and that will remind me how many days I still have left to, uh, complete the task.

'on the paper' 中 'the' 不必要，应为 'on paper'；'how many days I still left' 缺少助动词，应为 'how many days I still have left'。