Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the phrase 'so I use.' Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'I'm not very good at remembering things; therefore, I mostly use reminders on note apps. However, I am good at remembering places and names.'

例: I'm not very good at memorising things; therefore, I mostly rely on reminders on note apps to help me. However, I am quite good at remembering places and people's names.

提案: Your answer is relevant and provides reasons, but there are some errors like repeating 'and' and 'no taps' instead of 'note apps.' Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'since then' correctly and avoid minor mistakes. Proofread your answer mentally before speaking.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as missing a deadline for my college project because I was overwhelmed with work and did not manage my time well. Since then, I have started using reminders and note apps to stay organised and avoid making the same mistake.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect in parts. Instead of 'I remember doing exercise,' say 'I need to remember to exercise.' Also, 'doing some deadlines' is incorrect; you can say 'meeting deadlines.' Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to exercise regularly. Additionally, I have to keep track of deadlines and make certain changes in my routine when necessary.

提案: Your answer starts with an incomplete sentence 'Do remember important things.' Also, the last sentence is incomplete. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words like 'sometimes' and 'additionally' appropriately. Make sure to proofread your answer mentally before speaking.

例: To remember important things, I usually use the Notes app on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to access anytime. Sometimes, I also write reminders on sticky notes and place them in visible spots, like on my study desk, so I don't forget. Additionally, I prefer using a traditional notebook and pen when I want to make detailed notes.

× Not really. I'm not very good at remembering things so I use.

✓ Not really. I'm not very good at remembering things, so I use reminders.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly after 'I use'. It lacks an object for the verb 'use', making it a sentence structure error. Adding 'reminders' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Since then, I started using reminders and no taps to stay organized and avoid the mistake.

✓ Since then, I started using reminders and note apps to stay organized and avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'no taps' is incorrect and seems to be a typo for 'note apps'. Also, 'the mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' to generalize the context. Correcting these improves clarity and correctness.

× In my daily life, I remember doing exercise.

✓ In my daily life, I remember to do exercise.

The verb 'remember' is followed by the infinitive form 'to do' when referring to recalling to perform an action. Using 'doing' is incorrect here, so changing to 'remember to do exercise' is appropriate.

× I have to remember making certain changes in my routine or doing some deadlines.

✓ I have to remember to make certain changes in my routine or meet some deadlines.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'remember' should be followed by the infinitive 'to make' and 'to meet' for actions that need to be done. Also, 'doing some deadlines' is incorrect; 'meet some deadlines' is the correct collocation.

× Do remember important things.

✓ I do remember important things.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding the subject 'I' corrects the sentence structure and makes it a complete statement.

× Sometimes I also write reminders on a sticky note and place them in a visible spots like on my study desk so I don't forget.

✓ Sometimes I also write reminders on sticky notes and place them in visible spots like on my study desk so I don't forget.

The phrase 'a sticky note' conflicts with 'them' which is plural. Changing to 'sticky notes' matches the plural pronoun 'them'. Also, 'a visible spots' is incorrect; it should be 'visible spots' without 'a' as 'spots' is plural.

× Additionally, I prefer using a traditional notebook and pen when I want to make.

✓ Additionally, I prefer using a traditional notebook and pen when I want to make notes.

The sentence ends abruptly after 'make', lacking the object. Adding 'notes' completes the sentence and clarifies the intended meaning.