Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when I at primary school”应为“when I was in primary school”，“math matches”应为“math facts”或“math formulas”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，同时避免冗余，回答可以更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I was in primary school, I memorised math formulas which helped me get good grades.

提案: 回答中时态错误较多，如“haven't forgot”应为“have forgotten”，表达不够流畅且有些冗长。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达事件经过，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have forgotten my ID card at home once. I needed to go to the airport to fly to Hainan, so I felt upset and had to return home to get it.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“take something into my bed”应为“take some things with me”，词汇使用不准确且句子结构混乱。建议学习正确表达携带物品的方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: I need to remember to take some things with me when I go out, such as my pants, textbook, and a mirror.

提案: 回答中“boot”应为“book”，词汇错误影响理解。建议注意单词拼写，回答时使用连贯的句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I remember important things by taking notes in my notebook. Then, I review these notes regularly to help me remember them.

× For example, when I at primary school I was good at learning the math matches and then I get a good grade at school.

✓ For example, when I was at primary school I was good at learning the math matches and then I got a good grade at school.

句子中描述过去的事情，动词时态应使用过去式。'get' 应改为过去式 'got'，'when I at primary school' 缺少动词 'was'。

× Yes, I haven't forgot my ID card at my home.

✓ Yes, I haven't forgotten my ID card at my home.

'forgot' 是动词 'forget' 的过去式，完成时态中应使用过去分词 'forgotten'。

× However, I need to go to the airport to take a plane to Hainan province, so I feel a little bit sad that time and then I return back home to take my ID card.

✓ However, I needed to go to the airport to take a plane to Hainan province, so I felt a little bit sad at that time and then I returned back home to take my ID card.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式。'need'、'feel'、'return' 应改为过去式 'needed'、'felt'、'returned'。

× I need to remember take something into my bed when I go out every day.

✓ I need to remember to take something with me when I go out every day.

'remember' 后应接不定式 'to take'，'into my bed' 用法错误，表达携带物品应使用 'with me'。

× For example, I should take my pant, my textbook and my and the mirror into my bed to go with me.

✓ For example, I should take my pants, my textbook and the mirror with me when I go out.

'pant' 应为复数 'pants'，'into my bed' 用法错误，应使用 'with me' 表示携带。

× I remember important things by taking notes in my boot and then I will open my boot to read my notes again and again to help me remember these important things.

✓ I remember important things by taking notes in my notebook and then I will open my notebook to read my notes again and again to help me remember these important things.

'boot' 是错误单词，应为 'notebook'，表示笔记本。