Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget many vocabulary words. For example, when I learn new English words, I'm sometimes struggle to remember their meanings after a few days. However, I try to improve my review and recognition.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Last time I have a online interview but I have a sick so I forget these interviews and I lose the chance.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Usually I will write a my list for daily life in the weekends. Umm because I scare I void my important things.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I used to write a list in my form because I often forgot important things. Moreover, I usually write this in on the weekends.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 65.0提案: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用，避免重复表达，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget many vocabulary words. For example, when I learn new English words, I sometimes struggle to remember their meanings after a few days. However, I try to improve by reviewing them regularly.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，明确描述事件，并使用连接词使句子连贯。
例: Last time, I had an online interview, but I was sick, so I forgot about it and missed the opportunity.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明习惯，避免使用不恰当的词汇，并注意句子结构。
例: Usually, I write a to-do list on weekends because I don't want to forget important things.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和介词，简洁地说明方法，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I usually write a list in my notebook because I often forget important things. Moreover, I do this on weekends to prepare for the week ahead.
文法
× I'm sometimes struggle to remember their meanings after a few days.
✓ I sometimes struggle to remember their meanings after a few days.
这里的动词 struggle 前不应该加现在分词形式的 'am'，因为主语是第一人称单数，动词应直接用一般现在时形式。
× Last time I have a online interview but I have a sick so I forget these interviews and I lose the chance.
✓ Last time I had an online interview but I was sick so I forgot the interview and lost the chance.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词时态应使用过去式。'have' 应改为 'had'，'have a sick' 应改为 'was sick'，'forget' 应改为 'forgot'，'lose' 应改为 'lost'。
× Last time I have a online interview but I have a sick so I forget these interviews and I lose the chance.
✓ Last time I had an online interview but I was sick so I forgot the interview and lost the chance.
'a online interview' 中 'online' 以元音音素开头，应该使用不定冠词 'an' 而不是 'a'。
× Usually I will write a my list for daily life in the weekends.
✓ Usually I will write my list for daily life on the weekends.
'in the weekends' 应改为 'on the weekends'，因为表示具体的时间点时，通常用介词 'on'。另外，'a my list' 中 'a' 和 'my' 不应同时出现，应去掉 'a'。
× Usually I will write a my list for daily life in the weekends.
✓ Usually I will write my list for daily life on the weekends.
'a my list' 中 'a' 和 'my' 不应同时使用，'my' 已经表示所有关系，去掉 'a'。
× Moreover, I usually write this in on the weekends.
✓ Moreover, I usually write this on the weekends.
'in on the weekends' 中 'in' 和 'on' 不应同时出现，应去掉 'in'，保留正确的介词 'on'。
× Moreover, I usually write this in on the weekends.
✓ Moreover, I usually write this on the weekends.
句子中 'usually' 表示习惯性动作，时态应为一般现在时，'write' 保持原形正确。
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