Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, I'm not, because I tend to forget information easily even when I try my best to remember. This often causes problems for me, especially at school. For example, sometimes teachers ask me to read certain books, but I struggle to remember the details from them.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes I have. When I was a child I went to a restaurant with my parents but I got lost at the corner. Unfortunately I couldn't remember their phone numbers and I didn't have my phone with me so I couldn't contact them. It was quite scary but luckily a kind stranger helped me find them.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Your daily life In my daily life, I need to remember many important details, especially the key points included in the homework assigned by my teachers. Besides that, I often have to remember some calculations because I enjoy playing computer games that require quick thinking and problem solving skills. This helps me stay on.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Because of my bad memories, I prefer to write important notes and stick them on the door where I can see them every day. This method helps me remind me of tasks I need to complete and improve my efficiency. For example, I often write down appointments or shopping lists to stay organized and avoid missing anything important.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且部分表达重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。
例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget information easily. For instance, at school, I sometimes struggle to recall details from books assigned by my teachers.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词来增强连贯性，同时适当丰富词汇表达。
例: Yes, I have. When I was a child, I got lost near a restaurant while with my parents. Unfortunately, I couldn't remember their phone numbers and didn't have my phone, so I couldn't contact them. It was quite scary; however, a kind stranger helped me find them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中出现了语法错误和不完整句子，建议注意句子完整性和准确性，同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。
例: In my daily life, I need to remember many important details, especially key points from my homework. Besides that, I often recall calculations because I enjoy playing computer games that require quick thinking and problem-solving skills.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容具体且结构合理，但存在重复表达，建议避免重复并使用更多连接词使表达更自然。
例: Because of my poor memory, I prefer to write important notes and stick them on the door where I can see them daily. This method helps me remember tasks and improve my efficiency. For example, I write down appointments and shopping lists to stay organized and avoid missing anything important.
文法
× I went to a restaurant with my parents but I got lost at the corner.
✓ I went to a restaurant with my parents but I got lost around the corner.
介词“at the corner”通常用于表示具体的角落位置，而在这里表达迷路的意思时，应该用“around the corner”表示在拐角附近迷路。
× This method helps me remind me of tasks I need to complete and improve my efficiency.
✓ This method helps me remember tasks I need to complete and improve my efficiency.
句中“helps me remind me”重复使用了“me”，造成语法错误。正确表达应为“helps me remember”，即“帮助我记住”。
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