Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为直接，但语言表达不够自然，且有重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时使用更地道的表达方式。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget tasks before I get a chance to do them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（'although'和'but'同时使用），建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always double-check before doing tasks to make sure nothing is left out.

提案: 回答内容较为零散，缺乏连贯性。建议使用连接词组织句子，并提供更具体的细节。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to turn off the AC and heater to save energy. Also, I have to check in at work to record my attendance.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更清晰。

例: I set alarms and use a to-do list app on my phone, which reminds me at specific times about important tasks.

× No, although I'm not good at memorizing things, but I do check twice before I'm going to do something so I can ensure there's nothing left behind.

✓ No, although I'm not good at memorizing things, I do check twice before I'm going to do something so I can ensure there's nothing left behind.

句中同时使用了连词 'although' 和 'but'，这在英语中是重复且不正确的。应去掉其中一个，通常保留 'although'，去掉 'but'。

× I will set up a alarm and I have A to do list on my phone and it will remind me at a specific time to notice me that there's something I need to do.

✓ I will set up an alarm and I have a to-do list on my phone and it will remind me at a specific time to notify me that there's something I need to do.

'alarm' 前应使用不定冠词 'an'，因为 'alarm' 以元音音素开头。'A to do list' 中 'A' 应为小写 'a'，且 'to do list' 应连字符为 'to-do list'。此外，'notice me' 用词不当，应改为 'notify me'。