Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
Yes, I am good at memorizing things so I learned well in historic subject in my middle school. I always got a straight A in history I'm proud of.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Sure, for example, it is about 3 weeks ago, I forget forgot my student's card in the accommodation and I will fail to enter the teaching building.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Well, I think the most important thing that I need to remember is to bring my key of my house because I locked myself out.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I always use the assistant to remember in my phone to help me remember important things. I think this app is very useful for me because I always failed to remember something and it can remind me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免语法错误和拼写错误，如historic应为history，且句子结构应更自然流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并适当使用连接词。
例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, I always got straight A's in history during middle school, which I am very proud of.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复错误。
例: Yes, about three weeks ago, I forgot my student card in my accommodation, so I couldn't enter the teaching building.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 65.0提案: 表达时应注意词汇搭配，如house key而非key of my house，且句子结构应更自然。建议使用连接词丰富句子，使表达更连贯。
例: Well, I think the most important thing I need to remember every day is to bring my house key, because once I locked myself out.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中表达重复，且语法不够准确。建议避免重复表达，使用更准确的词汇和句式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I always use the reminder app on my phone to help me remember important things because I often forget them, and this app sends me timely notifications.
文法
× Sure, for example, it is about 3 weeks ago, I forget forgot my student's card in the accommodation and I will fail to enter the teaching building.
✓ Sure, for example, about 3 weeks ago, I forgot my student card in the accommodation and I failed to enter the teaching building.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应该使用过去时态。'forget forgot' 是错误的重复，正确用过去式 'forgot'。'will fail' 应改为过去时 'failed'，因为事件已经发生。
× I always got a straight A in history I'm proud of.
✓ I always got a straight A in history, which I'm proud of.
这里 'a straight A' 是单数，符合语境，但句子缺少连接词，导致结构不完整。添加 'which' 使句子更通顺。
× I always use the assistant to remember in my phone to help me remember important things.
✓ I always use the assistant on my phone to help me remember important things.
'remember in my phone' 中介词使用错误，正确应为 'on my phone'，表示在手机上使用应用程序。
× I always use the assistant to remember in my phone to help me remember important things. I think this app is very useful for me because I always failed to remember something and it can remind me.
✓ I always use the assistant on my phone to help me remember important things. I think this app is very useful for me because I always fail to remember something and it can remind me.
描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，'failed' 应改为 'fail'，表示经常发生的情况。
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