Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复且不够连贯，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. To remember new words or phrases, I usually repeat them three or four times, which helps me retain them better.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用完整句子并注意时态一致，同时增加细节使内容更具体。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For example, last month I missed a job interview because I stayed up late and forgot to set my alarm, so I woke up late at 11:30 AM.

提案: 回答缺乏条理且结尾用语不合适，建议直接回答问题并列举具体例子，避免使用口语化表达。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates like my friends' and parents' birthdays, as well as events such as job interviews and exams.

提案: 回答较为简单，建议使用更丰富的词汇和句型，并且使表达更自然流畅。

例: To remember important things, I usually write notes or set reminders on my phone. Sometimes, I also ask my friends to remind me, which helps me stay organized.

× Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things.

✓ Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things.

这里使用的是英式英语，动词拼写应保持一致，原句中memorizing是美式拼写，建议改为memorising以符合英式语境。

× I know like what I'm memorizing some words or phrases, I have to repeat them for many times, you know, like 3 or 4 times.

✓ I know that when I'm memorising some words or phrases, I have to repeat them many times, you know, like 3 or 4 times.

原句中 'I know like what I'm memorizing' 结构不正确，应使用 'I know that when I'm memorising' 来表达条件关系，且 'for many times' 应改为 'many times'，因为 'repeat' 后直接加次数即可。

× So it's, it's a, it's a basic skill, but I think it's a little.

✓ So it's a basic skill, but I think it's a little difficult.

原句不完整，缺少形容词来修饰 'a little'，应补充 'difficult' 使句子完整且有意义。

× Or several times I've lost count.

✓ I've lost count several times.

原句中 'Or' 用法不当，且语序不自然，改为 'I've lost count several times.' 更符合英语表达习惯。

× So you know, last month, you know it's a job interview and they and the appointment was scheduled for 10:00 AM.

✓ So, you know, last month I had a job interview and the appointment was scheduled for 10:00 AM.

原句结构混乱，重复使用 'you know'，且缺少主语，改为完整句子使表达清晰。

× But due to my habit of staying up late and waking up late and I forgot to set the alarm that night so I did open my eyes until it was 11/30.

✓ But due to my habit of staying up late and waking up late, I forgot to set the alarm that night, so I didn't open my eyes until it was 11:30.

原句中 'did open' 用法错误，否定句应使用 'didn't open'，且时间格式应为 '11:30'。

× So I forget that.

✓ So I forgot that.

句子描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去式 'forgot'，而不是现在式 'forget'。

× I've not thought about that before but I would say friends birthdays on parents birthday or some important event just like a job interview or the examination or something.

✓ I've not thought about that before, but I would say friends' birthdays, parents' birthdays, or some important events like a job interview or an examination.

原句中 'friends birthdays' 和 'parents birthday' 缺少所有格，且 'some important event' 应为复数 'events'，'the examination' 前应加不定冠词 'an'。

× So I draw a blank.

✓ So I draw a blank sometimes.

原句缺少时间状语，导致表达不完整，补充 'sometimes' 使句意明确。

× Well, the most accessible way is just to keep it in your brain.

✓ Well, the most accessible way is just to keep it in your mind.

英语中通常用 'keep in mind' 表示记住某事，'keep in your brain' 不符合习惯用法。

× But to maintain it, I would write a note or make a memorandum or just telling my friends to inform me.

✓ But to maintain it, I would write a note or make a memorandum or just tell my friends to inform me.

原句中 'just telling' 语法错误，应改为动词原形 'just tell' 以保持并列结构一致。