Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免断句和重复表达。可以尝试使用更自然的表达方式，并且控制答案长度在5句以内。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially when I feel stressed about exams or work. This pressure sometimes causes anxiety, which makes it harder for me to concentrate and remember important information.

提案: 回答中句子连接不够自然，存在句子碎片问题。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，同时提供更多细节来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my father's birthday because I was very busy with work, which made me feel quite sorry and disappointed.

提案: 回答中断句不完整，表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，使用连词使内容连贯，并具体说明需要记住的内容。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my assignments for the next day. I usually make a list to ensure I complete everything before the deadline.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子连接略显生硬。建议使用更多连词使表达更自然，同时丰富细节以增强内容的具体性。

例: I usually write important things down because it helps me remember better by visualising the information. I often use a note-taking app on my phone, which makes it easy to review and reinforce my memory later.

× I'm not good at remembering things because I often. Find stressful to remember the important information when I have to record details for an exam or work.

✓ I'm not good at remembering things because I often find it stressful to remember important information when I have to record details for an exam or work.

句子中“because I often. Find stressful”结构不完整，句号导致句子断裂，且缺少宾语“it”。应将两部分合并为完整句子，并补充宾语。

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important before.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before.

“have ever forgotten”中“ever”用法不当，通常在肯定句中不与“ever”连用，且“have forgotten”已表示过去经历，去掉“ever”更自然。

× Once I just forgot my father's birthday. Which made me feel quite sorry and disappointed.

✓ Once I just forgot my father's birthday, which made me feel quite sorry and disappointed.

“Which made me feel...”是一个非限制性定语从句，不能单独成句，应与前句用逗号连接。

× That is mainly because that I was very busy with my work at that time.

✓ That is mainly because I was very busy with my work at that time.

“because that”中“that”多余，应去掉。

× I think the most. Necessary part. I need to remember in my daily life may be the next day's assignments.

✓ I think the most necessary part I need to remember in my daily life may be the next day's assignments.

句子被不恰当的句号分割，导致结构不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。

× I need to make a list of that so that I can complete the. Before the deadline.

✓ I need to make a list of that so that I can complete it before the deadline.

“complete the.”后面缺少宾语，且句号导致句子断裂，应补充宾语“it”并合并句子。

× Because it is a way to record information in a more visual way, enhancing my memory.

✓ I usually write them down to remember them because it is a way to record information in a more visual way, enhancing my memory.

该句为从句，不能单独成句，应与前句合并。

× And I often use note taking app on my phone, which makes it easier to review and remember important details later.

✓ And I often use a note-taking app on my phone, which makes it easier to review and remember important details later.

“note taking app”缺少冠词且“note-taking”应连字符连接。

× Seeing the notes repeated.

✓ Seeing the notes repeatedly helps me remember them.

“Seeing the notes repeated.”是一个不完整的句子，缺少主语和谓语，应补充完整。